A Moonwing volunteered to be one of a test subjects for one of Twilight sparkles spells. The spell that was supposed to enhance his ability to the max and make him invincible went terribly wrong and changed Moonwings gender instead of his ability. He was in absolute shock when this has happens but he was trying to keep his manliness and brushing it off and hoped that Twilights finds a way to turn him back into a colt.
He accidentally met a colt that happened to fall in love with him. what should he do?
This fanfic in Clop Free. There will be No CLOP in this fanfic!
Chapters (4)
Pretty good so far, but there's a few things you should do to polish it up.
1) Add some sort of note to the original genderflip spell like. "Warning, this spell can be used on a pony only once" Something like that.
2) Give the characters a bit more feeling instead of just adding the word, 'said' to every name. Some possible ones could be. "OH NO!!!" Twilight Exclaimed, noticing the lack of a reversal spell. Another one you could try is, "Wh- what happened?!" Moonwing said, baffled and confused by what was going on.
3) There are an awful lot of Gramarical errors, might I suggest finding a proof reader if you need help? I could take the place as a tempoorary one if you'd like, I'll even clean up this chapter if you decide you want to use me for help. Don't worry, I don't bite and I could help as much as possible!
The main problem I had with this chapter is it felt like it was going too fast. And as Trey said the grammar was not in good shape. But I guess other than that it was....? Meh ok I guess I've read better but I will see where this will be going.
Ok I'll admit this chapter was a bit better, the grammar was still not great though but I thought it was an improvement. You also got me into the story more than you did previously.
Well, he's BONED! Get it? It's a sex joke!
Oh my gosh
The Spaces......They Don't Exist In Some Paragraphs.......
Also......RUN MOONBEAM RUN
DO NOT LET THIS STALLION'S.......cuteEVIL WAYS!YOU ARE A STALLION DO NOT GIVE IN TO TEMPTATION!!
I Repeat What My Friend Just Said....RUN MOON BEAM RUN!
Indeed,Good Sir
I Don't Know.......I Kinda Like Where This Is Going
Shut Up,Insanity
Yeah,You Don't Know The Crisis Of Moonbeam Right Now
Neither Do You.....Have You Ever Been A Mare And Got A "Friendly Date" From A Random Cute Stallion?I'm Directing This To Logic Since He Is Also A Non-Human Being
........No.....I Haven't.......
Just As I Expected
Will You Two Please Settle This Argument!It Is Wrong!That Is Final!
So Is That One Time You Said No More Clopping?
...........~Sigh~......Alright......I'll Not Judge This (Awesomely Cool)(Meh) Gender-Bend Story Based On Two Chapters.....I'm Keeping An Eye On You Two
(YOU WIN THIS ROUND INSANITY)
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YaY! ok thank you :D 
Im going to try work on my grammer and fix it for the next chapter . Glad you got into my story
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I... I don't have words for you... other than... INSANITY FTW!
2437160 That will mostly depend on how you do the next chapter, if it doesn't do good enough you will maybe lose me. Plus the character is taking this rule 63ing way too calmly, from what I understand a lot of people, me included, read rule 63 stories because we enjoy watching the victim squirm because his/her life just took a huge u-turn.
man I hate cliffhangers. Pretty good so far
but grammer needs a tiny tiny bit of work. I love the cover art by the way ^^
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I Thank Thee Fellow Red-User
You Know I Suggested That Color
And The Site Suggested You To Use That Color
You Know What?I Ain't Even Mad
COOL STORY :D!
KILL HIM!KILL BOLT WITH FIRE!!
The Hell?...
HE HAS COMMITTED A CRIME MOST UNDESIRABLE TO-
Are You Having One Of You 'Moment's' Again?
Hello Guys,I'm Back From-WHAT THE!?Why Is The Wall Over Their Splashed With Black Paint And Scribbled With The Words"Black Figure Our Savior"?........And Why A Bolt Plush Stabbed Onto The Wall Several Times?
Dr.Insano Here Was 'Busy' With This When You Were Away....
I thought He Like Bo-
I Said I Like Where The Date Was Going.Not The Stallion In Question......Though I Do Like Creepy,Not This Kind Of Creepy.....Creepy Love Is The Lowest Of The Low For Me
I Can't Believe That I Actually Agree With You,Insanity
Well,My Opinion On This Is-*Smack*
Me No Likey Your Opinion
Hmmm well it's dark, I'll give it that.
very well done ^^ I demand MORE! um..if that's ok with you..
"because your look so dirty." Shouldn't that 'your' be 'you'?
Apart from that, brilliant.
'Rarity ran into the roomand' Needs a space.
2475100 Ok Thank you will fix that right now x3!
"who could have done this to you?* I think that * should be a ".
Overall, I really enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you so much for telling me some of my mistakes :D!
and Glad you Liked it
Better, better, better! And longer! Loved this chapter.
The suspense! Its killing me!
'Bolt's rib cage tingled and he laughed from how much it tingled' I think you can shorten that by writing 'Bolt's rib cage tingled causing him to laugh'
And might I say that was
. You really did up the suspense. I love it. Can't wait to see what happens. 
I'll get straight to the point, I didn't think this chapter was great. I didn't think it was bad either. The whole time reading I had the feeling this chapter was trying too hard to be good. During the whole chapter I was constently rolling my eyes and at one point
int at what was happening though most of the time that was at bolt and I can imagine lots of people do that. And about this crystal mountain where is it? We don't see a mountain in the everfree I believe.
Story aside I didn't really notice any grammar or spelling errors besides some lower case I's so good job on that. All in all I would probley give this chapter a 6/10, it wasn't very good but it was alright.
2500077 Thank you so much for giving me your honest opinion about this chapter. I guess i was trying to make this chapter funny and dark at the same time. I guess i been trying to hard.
Next chapter hopefully i won't do that.
Coal as BUCK
2500089 I was thinking today and I found out why this story just isn't clicking with my like most rule 63. I enjoy rule 63 stories because I enjoy the reaction of a female having to get used to morning boners or a male having to deal with heat. With your story it feels like the genderswap is just a side part to the adventure of twilight and bolt. Now I will give your story the benefit of the doubt but I will be watching more closely for errors.
2501701 well i'd give it a 9/10
I don't always read rule 63, but when I do, it's Twilight 's fault.