Equestria is in turmoil. It falls to four ponies to reform as the Elements of Harmony, before all is lost.
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I am happy to see that you are still working on this This and the previous story have been one of my favourite stories in this website
Read the first and this one over the last two days. Freaking great work.
It was rough at the start of the first, but it keeps getting better and better.
Finish it!!
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Rough as in a bit heavy to read, or rough as in unpolished?
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Both. The language, grammar, and wording was difficult, but after a few chapters, it was an amazing story.
There's a theme of grammatical errors that should be caught, easily, by a good editor. But, that's just something everypony learns over time.