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Accepting bets on both the identity of both Mare-Do-Well, and Generosity. (Still won't reveal them, though.
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fuck yes more of this
Mare-Do-Well is Lightning Dust, but I do not know who Generosity will be.
Ha ha ha, I was the first person to fav this story. I'm awesome.
obviously mare do well has to be best pony.
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That all depends on your definition and choice of best pony. Best pony might not be Mare-do-well. Best pony might be the Caped Avenger. Or Batmane. On a side note: two chapters later she will spring into action! Spoiler, I guess.
Generosity is- TO BE CONTINUED!
A sequel.. Is this true? Am i really awake
? AWESOME 
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Just one little Question, before i start reading: Rainbow will be the main character, right
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Rainbow will be a main character. I'm trying to give a view of the full country here; there will be parts devoted to small characters, too. Nevertheless, she will be one of the main drug-- I mean heroines.
As for your other question: you are most certainly awake, Mr. Anderson.
I am shipping Trixie and Shining Armor so hard right now. And Soarin and Dash. And Vinyl and um, that rock.
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You make Tom happy.
2404758 No, my headcanon is that Tom got together with Jennifer from PewDiePie. And plus, he's too mainstream for Vinyl. She deserves Paul of Rock Vegas
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....Aaaaand you just lost me. Zvarri!
On a side note, finally decided on the order of the next two chapters: first the insanely horrid, then the depressingly melancholic. Yay, pacing!
Hooo boy. I finished the first part of the next chapter, and let me tell you: it's gruesome, it's disgusting, it's horrifying-- exactly as I envisioned it. Warning to those of weak heart: the next chapter will make that mature and dark tag seem more relevant than ever. Be prepared for drugs, sex and violence, and not the rock and roll afterglow style, but the gut-churning, life-burning type. In short, possibly the most brutal chapter coming up soon.
2405696 Cool. Might as well get grimdark outta my system (unless you have a twist ending). I'm bout done with Fo:E and then the next chapter. Reminds me, by your description, of that rock song called 'Love, hate, sex, pain".
Maybe my shipping dream will come true of the Great and Powerful Shining Armor (or TrixArmor)!
Unless Payback is someone's name, I think he should yell "Packback, bitch" instead of "That's for payback, bitch".
Also, unless Zecora's worried about the ponies' dislike of outsiders would cause them to act like Silent Song in this story, that should read "xenophobia". Xenophilia is kind of the opposite.
*Smirks sadistically* May Rarity point and laugh from heaven as Song burns in hell. ... Or whatever they're called in FIM
. ... Okay, I couldn't find a more appropriate Rarity emote.
Personally hoping to see Twilights and Applejacks reactions when they not only realize Dashie's innocent, but that they've utterly failed their elements. Assuming there's a chance of them getting called out on it.
Also curious what their reactions'll be when they find out what they think happened didn't result in Dashie loosing personal possession of her element.
And hoping they survive this ordeal. They've gone through too much to just up and die. ESPECIALLY without being presented with an apology from... well, every anti-blue scumbag in Equestria. (Still personally a Red, but there are limits!)
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Xenophobia... damn, that's what you get when you write fanfic in a workplace.
Also, he is insane. He does not need to be coherent.
Correction: he was insane.
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Incoherent I can understand, but grammatically incorrect? That's too much even for a crazy stallion.
Still a better love story than King Sombra.
Wait, I think I mixed something up. Here, lemme try again...
Still a better villain than Twilight.
Still a better Twilight than King Sombra.
Meh, I'll think of it later.
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Believe me, I've heard even politicians say stuff that was grammatically incorrect, not because he was lying anyway .
Change? Didn't notice. *Checks the old chapters* Yep. I personally like the breaks.
My favourite scene was when Big Mac threw the bottles against the wall. That made feel proud of the quiet stallion.
God, now I ship Big Mac and Pinkie. YOU ARE RUINING MY MIIIIIIIIIIIIIND!
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MacXhaybale and PinkieXclone OTP!
2444632 Rainbow x Soar in and Trixiex Shining Armor new OTP!
hey is't twilight's mane dark blue meaning she might have to go on the run soon(personally I can't wait for that conversation between trixie and twilight.)
Think it will go something like this:
Twilight: soooo... um my brother
Trixie: uh yeah he's a nice colt
Twilight: yeah he is. um just on a off chance you wouldn't happen to know somepony
Trixie: know why
Twilight: uh no reason no reason at all
(What the heck did i just read
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Okay.. I'm a little bit confused right now.. So the Blue-Hater who started this all, is Silent Song? Or am i missing something
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He's just a psycho who had a crush on Cloudchaser. Whole stuff with the nationwide persecution came handy for him. Or hoofy. Choose one.
Nice Chapter! Just a little bit confusing. Aaaand: WAY to few Rainbow Dash!
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.. Okay, makes sense *approvesmilie*. can't wait for the next chapter
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What the
(Please dont feel offensed or something like that by my comments; My english isnt very god, so i dont really know if it can be read as mean or not =S
"rouge griffon group"?
There are red griffons now?
Rogue is the word you're looking for.
"I remembered how much I love this tow"
"I remembered how much I love this town"
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I deliberately put rouge in, to see if someone notices.
I liked the chapter but wished you had kept it so i focused more on the main group i like then all the other small groups.
Generosity is
BlueRedblood and Mare-Do-Well is Cheerilie.I so like this story of yours! It's simply superb! You definetely need to find a desire and time to continue it - this is maybe the best story based on colorism through this entire fandom
BTW:RBxAJ = awesome
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Thank you. While I definitely have room to evolve in the writing style department, I'm somewhat pride myself upon choosing new ideas for stories, or put a twist in existing ones. Rest assured, I want to continue this story, but 40-50 C of hotness practically killed me during summer. Regardless, I have most of the next chapter ready, and plan to update more frequently. (Although I suppose the best authors on the site tend to write a chapte for months, so I've got that part right.)
As foreshadowing, here's the next chapter's title:
Nightmares of Equestria
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And btw I also think that this beautiful story really lack faves and upvotes. Let me help it with this serious problem, even if it's not very much I can do
FOREVER! AND EVER! In my favlist.
thank god this is back
Good
Keep up the good work!
I forgot about this, truth be told. Still just as good as it ever was though, not complaining in any way.
Ever awaiting the day that may yet come. The day when Twilight and Applejack discover that they have failed and as such, are no longer element barers while the supposed traitor is still worthy of holding hers. It may not come, but the breakdown of those two is glorious to imagine. Good to see this back, mate.
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Thanks. As to your question...
I cannot dishonestly unclaim the possible fact that later on they might not fail to discover that they never sometimes forever aren't unconnected to the Elements of Harmony. Maybe.
I was worried it had died ;_;
Hey look, an update! Must be a trick of the light...
Two things:
1. This is why I hate celestia she holds the fate of the world in her hooves and it's only because of her good graces that equestria hasn't taken over the world.
2. Look i like that your showing us this epic story, but please just have a tighter focus on things. I love the main cast watching princess Celestia murder her enemies isn't what I want to see. I want to see the blue ponies, not how whatever the hell flutershy and pinkie are doing.
Well, that escalated quickly and ended abruptly.
Saw it coming a mile away. 
Suspense is killing. Literally.
I hope that Queen Crazybug will realise that "resistance is futile" without allies. Otherwise CCF will "finish the work", so to say.
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Dun dun duuuun
Dear J.H.Christ, thank you! IT'S ALIVE!!!
Nice intrigue so far, can't wait for continuation!