Twilight has always been interested in whether or not there were other universes besides her own, so she decides to build something to help her do that, but when she uses it, there is a problem and Twilight and her friends are transported to our world and are transformed to look like us. What will happen to them? Will they make it back to Equestria? How will they get along with humans?
*Edit* Credit to HazuraSinner for the cover image & Pink Pearl for finding it ^_^
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I will finish up the rest of this when I get the time. As for now, here is Derpy
i like the idea, always did like these kinds, but you need to flesh out the chapters more and add some detail to it. also they're kings of....short.
I appreciate the feed back. This is my first time doing this so I didn't know exactly how to do it.
I will attempt adding more detail in the next chapters.
Indenting and separating your paragraphs would make it a bit easier to read.
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Thanks for telling me. I forgot to hit 'indent paragraphs' when i finished.
sorry, hit publish instead of edit
hmmm.....i think i can find a better picture or try to draw one that's better than that one. that one looks like an edit of sailor moon characters. if it's ok?
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Its no problem at all! Thanks!
2346109 i FOUND these. X3 remember to credit. found this one
http://hazurasinner.deviantart.com/art/IT-IS-ON-298246558?q=gallery%3Ahazurasinner%2F33986076&qo=18
and this one
http://johnjoseco.deviantart.com/art/Autograph-Money-330811174?q=gallery%3Ajohnjoseco%2F29033906&qo=50
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Wow, these look great! Thanks.
2346215 no problem. i'm a picture hound as well as an artist. i love helping people.
You got good punctuation, but add some beef to the stories, like in the last chapter, i would've had twilight have spike get everyone
Yep, that rachel girl is dash, wait, Rachel Dalke is a play on rainbow dash!
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and yeah, i'm working on doing that in the next chapter!
2346589 will the pegasus have energy wings?
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not 100% sure ATM, I am only 1 chapter in
i'm interested X3
Hmm.....I Think That Would Also Be My Reaction When I See Someone With A Rainbow-Dyed/Colored Hair
DUN
DUN
DUUUUUUN
Please update
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Don't worry, I'm working on it! School has been getting in my way
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yay
it´s so awesome
First off, let me apologize for not posting in a long time. I have been extremely busy with school, band, boy scouts, and other parts of my life.
Second, I cannot say for sure when I will get the next chapter up. I will try everything in my power to try to finish it, but as I said, I am very busy right now.
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Happy "It's been a month since your last chapter" day!!
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haha thanks! I'm trying but its been slow.
When is the next chapter going to come out and if you don't know when do you think you might know? I'm bored with waiting
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2508301 Sorry to stress you but uhh...
Guess what guys! I'm not dead!
3889234 WOO HOO