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DaBeejees


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The colors really screw up reading it. It's a nice touch- but the color choices don't make for relaxed reading.

In the mini-dropdown in the top right, change it from 'Light' to 'Dark'. That fixes ALL THE THINGS

I'm trying to see if I can make that as a default for the story

color to represent each voice? clever
the entire story line? fucking amazing
the story itself? holy fucking shit its epic
my opinion of how you write? i fucking love you man[homo or not, depends if you want it :trollestia::trollestia: ]

186791

The word is "Platonic love"...well, it's a phrase, not a word, but thank you so much regardless!

oh lawdy
my eyes
besides that its a good read

187823

Did you read the description? lol

wow
i cant believe how good this is
and the light dark change makes the coloured text easy to read
and now that i mention it
COLOURED TEXT?!?!?!
best idea EVER
none of the fictions ive read uses coloured text before
you sir, are genious

first?
lol who cares
a good story is worth reading anyway XD :D

187841

Honestly, I started doing it to help me write it, haha! And the light-dark part came from a desperate attempt to figure out a way to be able to read Fluttershy's yellow font...[Rarity and her white font hadn't been introduced yet, btw]

187847

Thank you! Though I do wish I was making the chapters longer, but, hell, I end 'em when the plot structure makes me. xD

188329

Maybe...maybe not...

But seriously, I don't know yet. It seems you've gotten the hints I left in the previous chapters though. But what exactly are they hinting at?

*ghost noises*

188344 They are so totally going for a DerpyxOC ship. Maybe a love triangle- Seriously, it's so obvious she has a thing for him.

Doesn't make it less adorable.

188357

A possible crush doesn't automatically make the entire story a ship. <---me being cryptic. xDD

188438

A crush is romance. Still doesn't make the entire story a ship. xDDDDD

188467 Oh well. Did I tell you about dragonsreach? They have Cwurved Shwords.

CWURVED. SHWORDS.

well...then....if this is random comment day then....
LIGHTNING BOLT! LIGHNING BOLT -my OC shoots lightning out of the giant thunderstorm he is in <----- is my OCs ability....he loves lightning and is the usual "im not going to be hurt by lightning" pegasus

189778

OH CELESTIA!

-scrambles to dodge them-

hmm
not bad
not bad
lets see where this goes :)

194844

I just finished writing chapter 9, so hang tight and I'll reformat and publish it.

195010

I need to take a break at some point, though, haha. So far, I've simply been writing them when I've gotten an idea for it. And that idea directly ties into the length of the chapters, which is why they vary so much.

...Story doesn't have enough yet for me to make an opinion on.

203682

Good. Because I don't even think I'm even an eighth (12.5%) of the way through where I'm planning to go with this story. You have a lot to look forward to. Christ, I'm essentially writing a novel here! xD

203698
Possible shipping seems all over the place though. First it seems like there will be shipping OC with Dash, then you have derpy get extremely embarrassed when he tries to look at her drawing, and then the stuff with Twilight. That is where my too soon for an opinion comes from.

204118

All I can say is that all of that will make sense eventually. This is a long story, and I doubt that much of it will make sense until towards the end.

hmm
the ending explanation is really good
i would never have gotten it otherwise

NELL: The Start of Longball! YES! You've mentioned it!
The story is amazing; I wonder why this story hasn't been featured or been seen by more people.

Tell them the title of the story and the author on the notes at the bottom! Leave a hyperlink! Like the one above!
That's all, folks!

Woah, Celestia is either trolling these ponies, or they talk extreemely sloooowly. A talk, BAM, party's over. Another one, BAM, it's already morning. :trollestia:

Oh so, the main character- Golden is in love triangle, he loves RD and she loves him back but only to discover that Ditzy is in love with him as well?

next one is required to save the world

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