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I'm a bisexual atheist from texas suffering from how lame life is and how awesome I am in comparison. (that's a joke...you can laugh now...)
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This could have been beautiful but you rushed it too much.
Please, no. Just. Don't.
2311666 thanks for the critique, I'll try harder next time
11/10 would clop again.
A rubber what?
Well, at least there's no chance of him impregnating anyone.
2314195 holy shit epic fail, and thanks for letting me now. the video was pretty hilarious, plus i love your profile pic. inception was an alright movie
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Not exactly the brightest plan, but still hot regardless! Thumbs up!
Gay part: NO
Straight part: YES
It would be pretty good if it weren't for all the grammatical errors for your next story i suggest having someone edit it
This was brilliant.
People complain about clopfics being nothing but sex and no story [not always a bad thing] but I rarely see clopfics that have as little story as this...
That sounds like an insult but it's not.
Make chapter two with Brae and his bro, but give him a sis as well for Big Mac and his mother while you're at it.
Oh and Little Strongheart because why not?
2320730 You don't like gaysex?
What are you, gay?
Understandable plot to this story lol hopefully it can be longer.
2334150
What is up with this "Gold Member" thing? I show up as one to myself, but not to anyone else. And then I see you on here, and it says you are a gold member. What is gold member? How does one become a gold member? All the new updates have me confused...
2354292 Magic.
2354312
Magic. It's always magic. Oh, it could be science. But nope, it's magic.
WHAT THE BUCK
2334150 My brother is gay, not me.
I know this because I walked outside and he was fucking the neighbour's cat.
2387009 >Beastiality equals gay
Oh you silly boy.
2387096 The cat was a guy
2389102 You have to specify that first, sweetie
now that was good. got to admit, addin this to my favs.
Awesome, It was not what I expected.....Maybe Part 2?
I'm honestly considering making a second chapter
2313138 Really, author. You should take a brief pause from writing clop and you should start reading some clop. It might give you some insight into what exactly makes a clopfic successful and what doesn't.
Just a small advice. If you are willing to give it a shot, I suggest darf, TAW or SleeplessBrony. Check them on this here website.
2522660 If you do, this won't be a one-shot and I'll remove it from the group.
2532186 That is good, healthy advice and I will do it. and I have read darf and TAW, they are both great authors. plus you must understand, this was like the first clopfic I ever wrote so it might not be to my best ability.
2532194 I can forgive you for that. God knows my first story is horrible. Take some time to read clop and, once you feel ready, write it.
Now wait, don't publish it yet! Read it to yourself and ask yourself "is this good?"
If you take more than one second to answer it, then you go back to the story and revise it. Repeat those steps over and over again.
2532205 Once again I thank you for the advice. I will rake this into account before I publish my next clopfic
so will there be a part 2 of berrun get his wish? or maybe another part of the 3 siblings going at it liek theres no tomo? XD
2356857 my thoughts exactly.
2570402 Why you no like gay sex? HOMPHOBIC!??!?!?!? lol it's cool
I was hoping it was a real robber.....
aaaaand the gay secks....
if ab is preggas...
my work here is done
before i got to gay part:This is a good clopfic
After i got to gay story:*has hung myself*
ok i will admit that the ending was funny as all get out
2734998 Thanks, that's what I strived for
2313179 oh I remember you, from that other bigmac story!
2532186 darf is sloppy and TAW is horribly generic, though.
Sleeplessbrony is k, however
2807369 I'm pretty sexy alright
2807380 Guess t'is a matter of taste. darf's sloppiness, however, is exactly the reason I find his stories good.
2808030 It does add a rather interesting "appeal" to them, I must admit.
However... I cannot stand his levels of pretentiousness. I think he tries too hard to make it seem like "art".
Also, he blocked me for no reason AFTER I praised him on one of his stories, so...
He is not a desirable man to me..
2807380 So seeing as you are already talking to me and it would be weird to ask this immediately , how are things? Is the wife well? what about the kids?
2809434 Wife's well. Been dead for three years, and the kids are in the cupboard.
2809839 Nice, nice, and what about the other wife?
2809988 A bitch as always. But you know as they say; you gotta do what you gotta do.
Would really like a second chapter. :D
nice
i want a 2 chapter o sequel 
( sorry for my english XD)
Make a second chapter perhaps applebloom goes to macs room for round two maybe
To everyone who has read and enjoyed this story I thank you and I am pleased to announce that I am going to be making a second chapter
3154733 DO WANT! (the straigth part more exactly)
btw, i dont get why so many dislikes, i don like m/m but the rest of the story was pretty good. Although the writing was a bit rushed (you could have developed the story a bit more) it's still ok.