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A Dream to Remember

When I fall asleep on Earth, I wake up in Equestria for 30 days, wake up on Earth, and the process repeats. With my less-than-intelligent friend by my side, what adventures will we face?

Fluttershy/OC, Rarity/OC

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Master Lyra

Master Lyra #1 · Mar 13th, 2012 · · ·

This is 20x better than the first version bro. It's not rushed, it sets the mood well, and the grammar+spelling is spot on.
Nice work!

FazzinaW

FazzinaW #2 · Mar 13th, 2012 · · ·

317572 Thanks man. It really helps hearing comments like that.

ParadisA

ParadisA #3 · Mar 14th, 2012 · · ·

This is WAY better than your first try... im really getting into this one.... just....wow.... i can feel the tension in the main character.... impressive.... very impressive