Luna volunteers herself to solves the kingdoms great dilemma and pays the price dearly for her sacrifice.
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Luna volunteers herself to solves the kingdoms great dilemma and pays the price dearly for her sacrifice.
A very nice story, I enjoyed it immensely, but it was far to fast pace. I could easily see this spanning 3-5k words rather than 1k.
There is promise here. I liked it, but I agree that it was too fast.
Wait, the battle was staged?! Hey, everypony! The princess is a big fat phony! In all seriousness this was a pretty good story. Keep up the good works.
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Awww thank you :)
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Super late. But thank you so much :)
2510223 Np, I really enjoyed the story.
P.S. If you don't mind me asking: What made you comeback and reply to a 7 week old comment? I'm just a tad bit curious.
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I really enjoyed this, but I feel it could have used some set-up. I couldn't help but feel slightly lost while reading this. But for what it is, it's good.
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thanks a bunch