• Member Since 16th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Nov 25th, 2019

Zephyscribe


Comments ( 11 )

A very nice story, I enjoyed it immensely, but it was far to fast pace. I could easily see this spanning 3-5k words rather than 1k.

There is promise here. I liked it, but I agree that it was too fast.

Wait, the battle was staged?! Hey, everypony! The princess is a big fat phony! In all seriousness this was a pretty good story. Keep up the good works.

2509684
Awww thank you :)

2239500
Super late. But thank you so much :)

2510223 Np, I really enjoyed the story.

P.S. If you don't mind me asking: What made you comeback and reply to a 7 week old comment? I'm just a tad bit curious.

I really enjoyed this, but I feel it could have used some set-up. I couldn't help but feel slightly lost while reading this. But for what it is, it's good.

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