Lonepone
Joined 4th Mar, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- AestheticB · 297k words · 3,444 83 · 59k views
- Visiden Visidane · 177k words · 2,146 49 · 23k views
- shinigamisparda · 17k words · 560 9 · 10k views
- TheMightyT · 47k words · 1,323 33 · 22k views
- AdrianVesper · 109k words · 344 4 · 3.6k views
- Yellowtail · 218k words · 1,915 63 · 26k views
- BronyWriter · 98k words · 967 28 · 11k views
- Flammenwerfer · 269k words · 1,603 57 · 30k views
Stats
Page generated in 0.075 seconds
Total duration
928 users online
347,320 hits today, 2,724,632 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Personally, I hate gore...
as in, HATE, it...
...
I really do...
...
But personal things aside, I liked it, a few errors here and there, but not much that I could see.
Either way, If the other chapters are not going to be as bad as this in terms of gore, then you have my like, a new watcher and a fav to this.
I doubt you shall fail.
Ya, I'm not exactly sure where I pulled all that from... I wrote all of that in one sitting at 3 in the morning, so maybe it was because I was slightly sleep deprived? But yes, the others won't be as gory. I was shooting for a mix of dark and humor, but ended up making a grim dark. The next chapter may be coming our later today, or tonight hopefully.
Give me a character other then pinkie pie to go insane next. It can be anyone, I'm open to ideas.
...Um, wow. I'm glad(ish) I read that. Mind doing Lyra or one of the many other ponies I think would be fabulous when crazy?
Hmm... An insane Lyra. I love the idea. I shall probably have it posted later today, at the earliest within 3 hours, latest in 12. See you then
Insane Derpy or Carrot Top!! Or how about Twist? They'd never suspect her..
Bass maker: wow. Just give me a hard one right off the bat. I have no clue where to start, yet started I have. This gonna be intresting... I need some help with ways to push her over the edge. I can make her unstable, but I can't give her that little push that will drive her mad. Help appreciated.
Actually, I got an idea. What is something that Lyra would want, to achieve to the exclusion of all else?
Alright, I'm saving the insane Lyra for later, and focusing on insane derpy. This shall be fun.
Insane Discord ? Or is he already insane ?
Your cover art... it's so groovy.
Lucluigi: what about a sane discord?
Airbournesquid: I know that's why I picked it. Insane pinkie on a headache inducing background
2222845
If thou would be as kind as too put Vinyl Scratch in this, Thy would be very happy
Ive been working on a vinyl episode this whole time. I'm gonna use it as a grand finale, or just realese it some point. I love vinyl, (not in a sick way) so I'm making her story the best.
Every day that goes by, I'm getting more and more creeped out that I actually wrote the first chapter. That I thought those words, and put them on paper. I am equally awed and yet morbidly surprised at myself...
is the the cover art moveing
2348762 nah. You like the stories? Tell me what you thought about them.
I'm not saying anything official, but I might be reviving the series. If I am, I shall be co-authoring them.
A couple of errors I noticed:
[continue cutting with one hand.] I think this should be hoof.
slam her head head into the wall. There is an extra head here.
Other than that, nice work. Do moar plz.
3234413Uhm, these things are kinda old. If you want more, though, I could put a few more chapters in my to-do list.
3234413Happy to tell you that this is now a the top of my to write list. I'll be starting the next chapter on monday.
And it will actually have some coherency this time around, instead of random gore for no reason.