Personally, I hate gore...
as in, HATE, it...
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I really do...
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But personal things aside, I liked it, a few errors here and there, but not much that I could see.
Either way, If the other chapters are not going to be as bad as this in terms of gore, then you have my like, a new watcher and a fav to this.
I doubt you shall fail.

Ya, I'm not exactly sure where I pulled all that from... I wrote all of that in one sitting at 3 in the morning, so maybe it was because I was slightly sleep deprived? But yes, the others won't be as gory. I was shooting for a mix of dark and humor, but ended up making a grim dark. The next chapter may be coming our later today, or tonight hopefully.

Give me a character other then pinkie pie to go insane next. It can be anyone, I'm open to ideas.

...Um, wow. I'm glad(ish) I read that. Mind doing Lyra or one of the many other ponies I think would be fabulous when crazy?

Hmm... An insane Lyra. I love the idea. I shall probably have it posted later today, at the earliest within 3 hours, latest in 12. See you then

Insane Derpy or Carrot Top!! Or how about Twist? They'd never suspect her..

Bass maker: wow. Just give me a hard one right off the bat. I have no clue where to start, yet started I have. This gonna be intresting... I need some help with ways to push her over the edge. I can make her unstable, but I can't give her that little push that will drive her mad. Help appreciated.

Actually, I got an idea. What is something that Lyra would want, to achieve to the exclusion of all else?

Alright, I'm saving the insane Lyra for later, and focusing on insane derpy. This shall be fun.

Insane Discord ? Or is he already insane ?

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If thou would be as kind as too put Vinyl Scratch in this, Thy would be very happy

A couple of errors I noticed:

[continue cutting with one hand.] I think this should be hoof.

slam her head head into the wall. There is an extra head here.

Other than that, nice work. Do moar plz.