• Member Since 4th Mar, 2013
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Vinyl thinks she has everything the way she wants it to be. A good DJ job, only Octavia to listen to, and no one holding her back. That changes when she meets Renegade Bass, a stallion who she has to play with for a night.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 22 )
Comment posted by Private Riften Guard deleted Mar 14th, 2013

umm hey bro i say you did a pretty good job on this chapter can't wait for the next onE! no pressure well gotta chatch a movie with derpy see'a around! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK LoNePoNe! bye :derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

I just killed the character that this story revolves around, and no one has anything to say? *sighs* Is anyone even reading this?

2542040 Wonderful. Now I can do whatever I want with the story line, and nopony will care.

2556717 2556717 Try putting tags on it. Then do whatever you want. Even better, if you follow me, then I'll follow you! o(^_^)o

2556799 Sarcasm, my friend. I'm hesitant to put flags on it, because my writing style is very different from most peoples I think. While a lot of people have a clear intention of how the story line will go, I just plan out the first few chapters, and then let the story take control. What I might have originally planned to be a gimdark might turn into a comedic dark story. But I could try to add some tags. And sure, I might as well follow you.

I'm reading this and I didn't see that coming. *tsk* *tsk* Vinyl, shoulda stopped sooner. Anywho, great story, I saw it interesting when I got on this website and I am hooked. I have yet to finish it but, I like where you are going with this, Good work Sir (or ma'am).:raritystarry::heart::moustache:

i can see the picture is from iFunny!
:P
:scootangel:

2556971 Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you like it and I'm currently working on the final chapters.

2557112 I do all my typing and insert music through a school laptop, and all images I use are from Ifunny.

You sir, you are just plain awesome!
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I think you're writing chapter 13 while i read this

I'm reading this!
And it's awesome!
You should have more views and likes and comments!

Where can i find this "A Glitch In The Program"?

Ooooh i wabt more like this!
I like your writing style!

2572362 Well, nice to know that I have another avid reader. 'A Glitch in The Program' is another one of my stories, and you can find it in my profile. And yeah, I have one final chapter, an epilogue.

Why do I find DotEXE's pieces just amazing?
<--- Well, I suppose that answers my question
All the songs you've put up on here so far are my favourite pieces of dubstep. No, I haven't just chosen them now.
But still, I find that awkward.

Anyway, there's some good writing in here, describing in detail and setting the scene very well, with a good storyline too.
Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

2939710 Did you actually go back and read all my old stuff? I don't know whether to say thanks for likening my work that much or sorry because of how bad that stuff must be compared to what I'm doing know. And I'm stalking you, so I know all your favorite songs.

Edit: I got confused. I thought you were commenting on my current story, which gets all the attention normally. I feel like idiot.

Space-Time-Paradox.
I DID IT

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