On day of destiny, two of the Cutie Mark Crusaders wake up to find that their day has finally come. What happens when one of them gets left out? When your fate is revealed: does it shape you or do you shape it? When the crusade for their cutie marks ends, the three little fillies find out what their friendship is really about.
Huh?
Did I confuse you? This story will take place over a few more chapters. These three are from the perspective of the CMC during their respective beginning of the same day.
There are some minor grammar bothers, but otherwise this is a spectacular idea.
Good work cant wait for more
A bit of a slow start, all told. You might have done better to have waited and then published the first two segments rather than just the first because, right now, we only have your summary to tell us what's happening.
Still, this is well-written and, being a CMC addict, I'll be more than willing to wait a few more instalments to get to the meat of the story.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!! please?
Are you even going to update this! Its good but it doesn't tell much of a story! I'd hate to be the bad guy but this story is really boring. All you left us has nothing to do with the description.
Peace out
- Ginger
Okay I didn't see this page but, if I were you I would just post it as one chapter.
Peace out
-Ginger
hurry and update soon :)
Update?? Pleaseeeee???
Hm, dun dun dun!