(THIS STORY WILL BE REWRITTEN)
Arcus, a super solider crash lands on Equestria after a harsh war on his planet. To stop the same outcome from happening to Equestria. He must protect and safeguard a whole world that is strange to him. He isn't alone though, he makes friends with the Mane six. Arcus makes it his mission to protect Equestria. He must speak to Equestria's leader Princess Celestia and he must gain her support to stand any chance against the enemy. But most importantly Arcus must rely on the magic of friendship to fight this dangerous enemy that lies ahead.
This story will follow Arcus, Twilight and Scootaloo on their quest on saving Equestria
Author: BronyXXJewBoy
Chapters (5)
Normally, I give insightful advice, but all I ca say is that you need to go into detail better.......that's really all I can say that is helpful, good effort though
man its geting good
2314263 Thank you for the support we are glad you like it so far and we hope you will continue to enjoy it.
Love how he went from serious to casual in 30 seconds lol 5/5
They could bend physics and they could breed with anything ..... huh who was the guy who found out they could do that last bit must have been akward
2399392 Lol, well super soldiers get board too
Sometimes they will do stupid things, like procreating. Think about how awkward it must be telling the scientist.
2399392
I can imagine that.
Scientist: "Now for our next test."
Super-human: "What's with the Gerbil?"
Scientist: "About that, we need you to have intercourse with it."
Super-human: pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw340_130807572255.png
very good story so far.
i can't wait to read the next chapter.
3320397 chapter 6 is pretty much done. its taking super long because i got a new job and my school started up. im about 75% done with chapter 6 and i hope to get it out by the end of the week.
3322019 ok.
sorry for the super long delay. im going to try my hardest to finish chapter six. i was almost complete with it and i lost everything. i am typing it again
I looked at this story because the cover art interested me, the description sounded like they went together and I thought this would be a cool story involving the human turning into a pony, but keeping his 'super-ness' (I speak of the muscle weave and other bits that were on the cover, of course) now, however, I don't think this is my kind of story, no offense to you, but yeah.
3787463 everyone has there opinions, and whos to say that he wont turn into a pony. i have been thinking about that.
(my small update) sadly i have been to busy for this fic. i only put that pic up because i had plans for luna having to get robotic parts due to an explosion. but i mainly put that pic up until my friend finished the cover. which i lost contact with her sadly. between work and my social life its hard to fit this fic into my life. but i do plan on finishing it. all 80 chapters. and lets say the next chapter is almost done. next month i get less hours so i can work on this. and this hole time i have been thinking of ideas, but back to what you said. it it fine that you don't like it. its just not for you. hell when ever he turns into a pony maybe you might get into it. who knows only time will tell :)