Hey im a new writer so any comments are always helpful!
When a Musically inclined colt helps Fluttershy in the forest, a relation ship blooms. Who is he? Why is he in Ponyville and what does this mean for the Mane 6, Cutie mark Crusaders, and the royal family? includes Fluttershy X OC, RD x AJ maybe TS X Luna
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Hey! So far the story looks very interesting and engaging.
As far as errors go, I'm only seeing minor formatting problems. Tabbing at the start of a paragraph is a must and having a character's thoughts in italics usually helps a reader distinguish thoughts from normal text.
All in all this was a fun read and I hope you decide to continue.
Try using italic when a character is thinking, helps a lot. EX:
Oh my! Fluttershy thought
I'm not a huge Fluttershy fan but more!
158495 Thank you for letting me know. I copied this from a Word document so I guess my indents and Itallics didn't copy. it should be fixed now!
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I use Word too, I feel your pain.
They are immune to the power of bacon??? The Horror!
you haven't released the next chapter yet, I really am looking forward to it... Do you need any help?
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Haha, yaaaaah..... I have already outlined the next three chapters, but its finding time to actually type them that is the problem. I am trying to pencil in some time but its difficult with school going. I have a heavy load this semester.
I can't believe the rating, this should actually deserve at least 4 stars. Maybe it's the short length that's upsetting, but that can be balanced with more chapters- I guess. But please, do continue. I look forward to reading more! Don't be shy with you're words either!
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i have some outlines already, This story seems far from over from where I see it.
next chapter will have a great RD and Baton scene. Im excited to type it!
176536 glad to hear!
Lovin this story. keep it up man.
Y u no new chapter?
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I'm sorry if I have upset you.
Yes I know i need to type up the next chapter. College has really started to hinder my pony time. So i plan to, someday soon, ignore my Inner Twilight Sparkle and dont do homework or study all day so i can type;
Thank you for reading. It's comments like this that give me fire to type. I love feedback more than you know!
-Baton Rouge
alright my Lousiana friend? It is a very nice character you have in Baton. He doesn't have an overpowering personality in the story and melds well with the storyline. I am a bit anxious, but I trust you will do the best job always.
Hey everypony! It's Baton! I'm giving you a small update on my story. I am currently finishing the next chapter and will begin work on chapter 8. Unfortunately I just moved to a new apartment and do not have Internet for a while. I am currently typing this on my iPhone. Due to my lack of Internet it will take time fire me to send the chapter to my editor. Then more time to receive it, go over it, and post it. I hope everyone will stick with me until I get my stuff together. As always, thank you for reading.
~Baton Rouge
Baton is Discord?!
awesome story by the way, keep it up! 
Oh no, what's gonna happen?
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I don't think he is Discord. I think from using his spell on Dash to play the song of her soul, when it got to the part from when Discord was around it is causing some kind of link for Discord to corrupt him into a host so he won't stay trapped in stone.
216894 I agree, but we can't rule out the possiblity of discord having some kind of direct link.
HAHAHAHAHAH GLORIOUS!!!!!!!!! GOOD JOB BROTHER DISCORD! TEAR APART THEIR PUNY INNOCENT LOVE WHILE I USE MY ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE!
Man I really hope Baton doesn't do anything to te Mane 6, especially Fluttershy
It would be awesome if something like Baton becoming evil then the mane 6 defeats him and he becomes good again then Fluttershy and him lives together forever happily. Haha
MOAR!!
you should use my character, he's my profile image
Wooooo New chapter
been waiting for this story to update.
Also
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Never seen this before.
And what has gotten into Baton?
Looking forward to the rest of this
EEYUP
Nice... Jealous, but nice.
Orchy lol
This development pleases me
That it is
MOAR
Ha ha. Little bumble-bee has a crush on Flittershy.
. Wait, what would I call this ship? Batonshy?
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Fluttershy wants that musical cock.