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Burnasius
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Burnasius
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No character tags?
2057259
Did not notice that, thanks for reminding me.
2067681
Thanks, I'm still working on next chapter.
Im surprised this don't have more views! I had trouble keeping a straight face at the end ;)
2073910
Well, I'm just new and just started so the views are that low.
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2125132
Well, are you going to explain further?
2125168 Naw, just found that sentence piece rather punny
2125250
Okay then
2125132 Get it? 'Cause they're horses.
On chapter 4, and while the story hasn't turned out like I expected, I still rather like what it's becoming. Kinda gave me an idea for a similar concept...
Really is a shame your story doesn't have more views. I think part of that may be due to the lack of canon characters - I suspect most people gravitate towards tags they know, though as the author of several somewhat obscure stories I'm no expert on popularity.
One thing I have to say though, you could use an editor. I read in one of the comments that you have dyslexia, which is fine (indeed, dyslexia has a surprising ability to make me forgive any and all errors), but if you know you have a problem you should do something about it.
But I like this story enough that I can volunteer as a makeshift editor, though my experience as such is limited. Still, I'll happily make the effort, though you may have to suffer through my occational comments and ramblings on my own idea which this inspired.
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I would love to take up your offer as help, but I have college life on me, a year and a half to be exact. I have been out of the loop of posting anything for a few years now, but I would not mind asking your help on somethings, as I still have a lot of ideas and for my one, sligtly just a bit crazy, not as aspiring, not really an ambitious, little project for here.