On chapter 4, and while the story hasn't turned out like I expected, I still rather like what it's becoming. Kinda gave me an idea for a similar concept...
Really is a shame your story doesn't have more views. I think part of that may be due to the lack of canon characters - I suspect most people gravitate towards tags they know, though as the author of several somewhat obscure stories I'm no expert on popularity.
One thing I have to say though, you could use an editor. I read in one of the comments that you have dyslexia, which is fine (indeed, dyslexia has a surprising ability to make me forgive any and all errors), but if you know you have a problem you should do something about it.
But I like this story enough that I can volunteer as a makeshift editor, though my experience as such is limited. Still, I'll happily make the effort, though you may have to suffer through my occational comments and ramblings on my own idea which this inspired.
On chapter 4, and while the story hasn't turned out like I expected, I still rather like what it's becoming. Kinda gave me an idea for a similar concept...
Really is a shame your story doesn't have more views. I think part of that may be due to the lack of canon characters - I suspect most people gravitate towards tags they know, though as the author of several somewhat obscure stories I'm no expert on popularity.
One thing I have to say though, you could use an editor. I read in one of the comments that you have dyslexia, which is fine (indeed, dyslexia has a surprising ability to make me forgive any and all errors), but if you know you have a problem you should do something about it.
But I like this story enough that I can volunteer as a makeshift editor, though my experience as such is limited. Still, I'll happily make the effort, though you may have to suffer through my occational comments and ramblings on my own idea which this inspired.