As long as I can walk away with this knowing this one turns out better, that's all the satisfaction I'll ever need. Thank you for your support!

Wolokai your stuff is always great... And I'm already love the story... But I beg u to put Demitri into the story

So itspretty much a reimaginingof the first story or the entire thing?

Great so far, though I don't think it will be quite as good as the original, then again most things are not.

I imagine White Quill sitting at a somewhat rundown bar with shot glasses sitting around him. White Quill himself looking disheveled, like he hasn't groomed in days. When he was speaking I imagined a the voice of a broken man speaking of the horrors that exist in this world.

An awesome introduction Wolokai. It really set the mood of what is to come. I came away from this feeling the dark atmosphere and the anger that Mena felt. Nicely done.

Oh the singing! I missed the songs from the first one! I'm all giddy that they are back. They really set the tone for the scene that they were sung in :D.

Looking forward to more.

Have a good one.

Oh my god! I was just searching through fanfics and saw you were using my pinkamena picture! This makes me happy!

Plz continue! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png

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