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Wolokai


"The road ahead is not easy, but neither is it impossible to travel. Run, Twilight Sparkle. Run."- Wolokai KuRR

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Well now, this should prove interesting. I look forward to more.

*pulls out popcorn*
Well, this looks like its going to be fun! :pinkiesmile:

I swear the super storm imagery and the cell remind me of Gears of War 3. Very interesting none the less. can't wait for more :twilightsmile:

This looks good.
Please, Author, my I have more?

Note: I love your stories. :pinkiesmile:

This is a really interesting story, I (im)patiently wait for the next chapter.:twilightsmile:

More. NAO.

In a way i'm mad, and then again not
In a way i wish for more, but then again, that would mean that the story would end sooner...
I'm new to FimFiction and I'm glad i have a chance to have something this epic to look forward to. You are quickly becoming my favorite author here, keep up the good work!

Twilight Sparkle in a straightjacket has my approval.

Unfortunately, she appears to be free of it now. Fortunately, there are very few places she'd be more likely to end up in one again.

Even if she doesn't, it's certainly an interesting start!

Goddamn you!
Now I have to wait for another update! Not only that but now the story will end sooner.:applecry:
Also as much as I would want to see Twi stay and save her, I get the feeling that abandoning her would prove to be more interesting to read, so that`s what I would like Twi to do.
Also I would like to point out that you really are a genious. You know how to make everything interesting

It's remind me of something. Maybe a game... or a film perhaps?
Whatever, Twilight don't really have so much choice, try to help Ditzy even without magic, or run away. :unsuresweetie:
I like Ditzy but... It's better for Twilight that she avoid the ashes ponies until she have a weapon

I hope that twilight rescues her, it feels more in character to me.
Also great job with explaining so much yet still leaving us in the dark!:twilightsmile:

the map description reminded me a bit of dead frontier

Hmmm - Twilight usually doesn't run, unless it's snakes, or bats, or bees, or hydras, or evil shadow-kings, or...

Okay, she does run. Like, a lot. But I think she'd rather stay and fight, even without her horn, and try to put a hoof through some sand-beast's head if that is what it takes to protect Ditzy.

Considering how Twilight thinks, she would probably try to save Ditzy. Me on the other hand, I would haul ass outta there.

She's probably going to save her.

Not Ditzy! Why?!:derpyderp2:

Try attacking one of the ash monsters.
Punch it in the face, if it goes down, stay and rescue, if it shrugs it off, get the hell out of there.

Masterfully crafted atmosphere. I always enjoy audio affects in literature so well done the too.
Keep up the good work.

You should make two different routes here. Let us choose which one happens; a "choose your own adventure" of sorts.

I don't want you to leave Derpy, but you know... It would be interesting to see what happens in both situations. :derpytongue2:

Good start. The writing itself is enough to convince me to continue for now.

Shits getting good

This is one of the most intense fics out there. :pinkiegasp:

Damn, didn't expect this to pop up.

This story is so well written that it's a shame it has such little recognition. Maybe if you added it to a group you could get more attention. Any way, this is very well made and I look forward to see where it goes.

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I'm afraid I don't know how to add this to a group.

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Don't worry, I added it to one for you. It's the Twilight Sparkle group.

...? Is there any chance you will explain why all of this is happening? and how it happened in the first place?:twilightsmile:

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Spoilers (Insert River Song catch reference here)

I thought that the use of Ro-mane-ian was simply an odd stylistic choice, but now I see that the language plays a bigger part in this story. I am really curious. :raritywink:

Is Twilight already dead?

I have a feeling that when Celestia finds out that Rainbow Dash beat, raped and might have caused the suicide of her Faithful Student she's going to feel two things - crushing, overwhelming guilt and rage hotter than the sun she rules. No idea what Celestia would actually do to RD though... somehow petrification or banishment to a celestial objects seems too lenient for a angry, grieving, guilt-ridden demi-goddess to impose on her.

Three years between updates, I almost thought this fic was dead.

Welcome, to the SCF.

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The SCP Containment Foundation. ^^

Excellent schools of magic, and a nice little group of hints on just WHAT the hell has happened in this world.

I haven't even read the story yet and you have all of my yes to this.

Very interesting!

Please update this, its the first amazing story ive found in months and its extremely unfortunate that its incomplete.

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