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You took a premise that really could have worked, then went and sh*t all over it using some of the most overblown imagery possible.
Applejack doesn't like bullies, so she kills them. Interesting concept and it could have worked but instead you go for the cheap gore. This ain't horror, it's just gore for the sake of gore. And that's not interesting even for horror fanatics.
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What the fuck is wrong with you, you sick, demented piece of dogshit.
(Joke) Alt. Title: The Babsfather Part VI: The Fantastic Goreage!
<-- That was my face while reading it. I felt nothin'. Not even the v@g!n@ drill make me change my expression.
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Dis sucked, bro.
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This really had no effect on me. Maybe next time not just gore for the sake of gore
Okay. So first off, we've got various spelling mistakes, someone who doesn't know how to use the horizontal line function, and a cupcakes spin-off. And it doesn't even need that sex tag, since there is no sex in it. Wow. I didn't think someone could feasibly make a story so bad.
Gore for the sake of gore, totally yes.
Just what the everloving fuck man.
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2063405 JON TRON OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOMG!
Either way too short of a read and like what Cryptic Keyboard said, [img]Image: http://25.media.tumblr.com/fbe6a5fb7a56f669f6995965c99dacba/tumblr_mhijvh1eNj1rwej9io10_400.gif[/img]
but anyway, I guess this is what happened after Sweet Apple Massacre
enjoy your shitty gore story
Didn't really phase me i read this stuff alot this is actually what I started
Out reading I've already read all the creepypastas and that was within
A couple weeks I've read
Story of the blanks
Cupcakes
Sweet apple massacre
Derpys day
The truth behind mlp
Cupcakes alternate ending
And a sh!t load more.
2063405 Hey John tron.
2062304 As he said it is just Gore for the sake of Gore and I would prefer if you didn't call my friends shit.
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Gore for the sake of gore? No wonder this 'story' ruined my day.
I have one reaction to this story:
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Poor Bab seed I know she was a bad bully, but she didn't deserve the torture.
Haha Apple jack! There are 2 rules of life: one never take advice from Pinkie and two always hide the evidence not put it in PLAIN SIGHT like an IDIOT!!
I think this is the most goriest story I ever read!! Well done!
no comment....
This reminds me of Sweet Apple Massacre, and it's just as sucky.
2088543 little ironic you said that...IN a comment
I liked this and "oooh its gore for the sake of gore" LOOK AT THE COVER IMAGE YOU FOOLS
.....American Psycho.
2062260 Yeah but for me it was fine, mostly because it doesn't affect me in the slightest and its fun to see other people get sick over this type of stuff. I mean I smiled through cupcakes while a couple of my friends vomited. (I also laughed whenever someone died in Final Destination 4 due to the unneeded flair of their deaths.)
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It didn't affect me either and if your friends lost their lunches after reading "Cupcakes" then they're pussies plain and simple. I found this however to be lazy and the author admits it was gore for the sake of gore, although that might be after the fact when all the negative comments started because I don't remember it back then.
I've got no issues with gory stories and when used properly it can have a rather... visceral reaction from the reader but when you go over the top and keep piling gore on gore you lose any thrill the story might have. It's becomes cartoony and loses any impact that it might have once had. I liken it to swearing. When used occasionally or rarely, it can be effective because it's unexpected and not considered something normal. But when every second or third word from your mouth is a curse it's now just a word. When I swear, people take notice. When my friend Paulo swears, it's just the way he expresses himself and people don't care.
This story was just too much to be taken seriously.
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It was always a story I was writing, that was just gore for the sake of gore.
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Believe it or not, I understand this point and I mention it in my comment. But with a little work you could have written something really interesting but instead took the lazy route.
It's like writing clop for the sake of clop. It's hollow and usually involves a lot of mechanical pony sex. It's boring. Give me something well written with clop or have the clop be organic and necessary to the story and not have the story just be a vehicle for ponies fucking.
A more interesting take on this could have been taking a psychological view of what is happening. Keep the gore by all means, but add something to it to give the story depth and character. Instead you deliver a weak story in line with movies like Saw or Hostel.
If this is what you want to write then please, feel free to do so but you also need to understand that 54 thumbs down for this story means that you didn't hit the mark like you might have hoped you did.
This is good, but nothing even comes close to cupcakes.