We'll not stand out in any way. Our entire image is crafted to leave no lasting memory with anyone we encounter. We're a rumor, recognizable only as deja vu and dismissed just as quickly. We don't exist; we were never even born. Anonymity is our name. Silence our native tongue. We're no longer part of the System. We're above the System. Over it. Beyond it. We're "them." We're "they." We are the Mares in Black.
A story written in collaboration with my brother, Brickguy213. Cover Art also done by Brickguy213. Note: This story is gonna be almost exactlly the same as the movie.
Chapters (3)
Seems legit.
1997068 The legitest.
hmmmm... Maybe with some original adventures, with this writing, it could become really good.
1997171>>1997098>>1997068 Thank you!
1997175 Now that was a quick reply... Have you been stalking me?!
1997068>>1997098>>1997171 Thank you very much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Also, do you like the cover art?
1997187 It could use a little more work, but i guess it is decent.
1997180 Not you... My own story...
1997194 You sound like a very lonely stalker...
1997198 Sigh* I'm a fortress of solitude! A lone lonely loner! Lol Ice age quote:
The opening of the Men in Black movie just about verbatim... So it's not really original or creative. Your writing is ok I guess, considering your just describing someone else's work. But you really didn't even do anything other than replace police with Guards, Mexican immigrants with griffins and made Agent D a mare Gotta give you a Down Vote.
2023751 Thanks for your opinion,though I am disappointed you didnt like it.I also updated the description so everyone else knows that its just like the movie except with ponys
2023751 I'm disappointed you didn't like my work, but am glad you gave your opinion. I am writing this exactly like the movie with a few changes. such as it being ponified, and maybe a few changes to the plot. Seeing as 50% of the crossovers on this site are the movie verbatim, just ponified, I'm not worried about it. There will always be a select few who criticize it, and thats fine. I will accept most criticism kindly, so will my sister, moondancer12. I will even accept ideas. Again I'm glad you made your opinion known, no I'm not glad you disliked it, and NO I don't hate you for it.
as a fan of the MiB trilogy, I look forward to seeing how this goes. Faving and watching. Please continue this fic.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Daring Do Gets Blackened, Part I: Us Are They
2046977 I am glad that you enjoyed the fic.I am continuing to write the fic,and make 2 more sequels.
2046981 LOL
your brother send me well i think he is...... not bad of a start and might i suggest throwing in some of your own scenes to mix it up a bit
2051572 Thanks for the suggestion,and I'm glad to here that you like it.