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Human in Equestria17,041 stories ·16,848 members

Dearest Princess Celestia

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Oh, look! Another human in Equestria! In which a girl learns about herself, her heart, her friends, and how they are all connected whilst on a magical vacation in a land of sunshine and raibows and candy-colored ponies with the most delightfully sugary sweet names I have ever encountered. Because apparently I have nothing better to do with my weekend. Constructive criticism always welcome.

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Swedish Royal Guard

Swedish Royal Guard #1 · Jan 6th, 2013 · · ·

This was a sweet short letter :)

Morphy

Morphy #2 · Jan 6th, 2013 · · ·

They had ~~man~~ questions for me

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I liked this one. Short and sweet. Yes yes, it started down the dark path of misanthropomorphism but managed to steer itself back around because, not all humans are bastards (as the group of the same name would profess).

Spout

Spout #3 · Jan 7th, 2013 · 1 · ·

I really did enjoy and appreciate this, but the references to Bronyism spoiled the illusion for me. In a comedic piece, it's okay, but the tone of this is more heartfelt (or seems to be). You get a thumbs up for sincerity.

Sollace

Sollace #4 · Aug 5th, 2014 · · ·

This really is a touching piece. As others have stated, it could go without the brony references but I was able to enjoy it all the same. I hope you decide to continue writing.