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Emerald Zweihander
Hi! I hope that I can learn a lot from all you AWESOME writers and STUNNING poets.I hope I can make a good impression on you guys.
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I actually like this, the only thing i wast too fond of was that everything progressed a little too quickly, like you could have more. . . "fluff" if you will, in your story and make it an even more enjoyable experience to read. Above all else, just add more descriptive sentences to gove the story the justice it needs and deserves
1956785 Thank you for the advice good sir/Mam
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Have mercy...
1957108 HAHAHA WTF AHAHAH!
I would appreciate it if those who dislike could give me a piece of what they think would be better.
So the ponies are anthros in this story? Cool. Always a fan of male human/female anthro pony romances. And this gets extra points if the romance is with Fluer, like the character tag implies.
what? damn it! this is an anthro story?! shit! i thought it was only going to be the main character who was anthro! damn it i hate anthro stories!
but i will give it a shot i'm not that ignorant to think all anthro stories are bad.
and the first chapter was pretty decent.
Wait, does Philomena know he is a werecat, or is he not in a human form?
i got so lost with the pov changes i didn't know who was who until philomena called him a cat
1969730 he's in the picture, dude, pretty sure he's in his cat form if Philomena called him a cat.
and also can he even change his form?
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The picture is really just showing what he could change into. Otherwhise why the human tag. Plus like I asked, does she know what he is, or is he in his animal form.
If the were people did not have a human form then they would have been hunted by the rest of the population a long time ago.
1969983 in the first chapter celestia searches tora's mind and looks at his memories so i am pretty sure she knows, even if he is in his human form(assuming he has one)
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Okay. But wheren't we talking about how Philomina knows, and the confusion she caused with weither or not he is in a human, or animal form.
1970016 oh crap sorry lol mixed them together
.... anyways, i'm guessing he's in his cat form and i doubt that philomena has some wierd ability to sense peoples other forms or some wierd shit like that...
now... i'm not going to argue more about this since there is no real way to tell, the only person who could tell us for sure is TechnoScratch so let him do just that.
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That is what I am waiting for, excet he still hasn't responded yet. Hope he does soon. I am reading this thinking that he is going to be in his human form most of the time, and in his animal form only really durig conflicts. He also hasn't really said if the ponies are really anthro, or umamimis, which are just humans with very little horse features.
1970062 damnit now i have even more questions
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Sorry.
1970074 shut your trap
1970082
Uhmmm...okay??
1970091 it's hard trying to sound sarcastic through the internet
1970046 . 1970062 I can answer. Philomena is a bird, Cats eat birds, predators have ways of telling their prey apart, in the same way prey can tell predators apart, Human form mostly and his mind was clouded when Celestia read it, so all she could read while he was unconscious was emotion, his dreams. When he woke up his mind became clear and she could read it with ease, he never thought "I'm a cat!" so Celestia's oblivious.
loved it when shining armor threw his helmet at blueblood
2029808 Thanks oh i just put up the music for this chapter in links so please check it out and see what you think.
2029929 i like it
also
laughed so hard
2030010 Thanks also thank my editor 12 he is an awsome person to bounce ideas back and forth with
2030024 could you... perhaps, send a link to his profile?
1970062 Well i will say its umamimis and he is in his human form he can change forms but he can't fully change the reasoning behind that will come later.
I'm pretty sure that you guys are gonna love who the voices are well the ones at the end.
So if i have not answered any questions right please inform me if you have any more!
1970062 They still are coverd in fur and they do kinda still have muzzles so yeah umamimis.
2030039 I don't see why not but he is just under your comment.
2030078 oh yeah... so he is.... god, i feel so dumb right now
2030093 It happens to the best of us bro...
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2030053
This statment kinda makes me think that you don't know the difference between anthro, and umamimi. An anthro pony looks like this. An umamimi is basically a human that has horse ears, and a horse tail, and in this case wings for pegasi, and horns for unicorns. So which is it?
2030151 Hmm Wow i feel pretty stupid good sir Ive been losing sleep because my little brother got his ged and thinks partying is what is needed for weeks on end...I swear he is gonna be meeting the back of my Kanabo if he doesn't stop
2030118 It didn't show.
2030193 right click then new tab
dont know why it wont show 
2030151 So they still have their fur correct? for umamimis.
2030118 HAHAHA! Oh Dear sweet Luna MY SIDES!
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No. Like I said, umamimis are basically just humans that have horse ears and a tail. Like a nekomimi is just a human with cat ears and a tail. Umamimi is just another version of humanized. So are the ponies in this story humanized, or anthro?
2030201Anthro and thank you for clearing that up....
2030201>>1970091>>1957108>>2030151>>1969903>>1971582 What would you guys do if you woke up one morning and this pony is looking you in the eyes and does this dashie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw3191-PREPARE_THY_ANAL_CAVITY.jpg
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I would probaly think it is a dream, push her off of my bed, and go back to sleep. It wouldn't be the first time something wierd like that happend in a dream. I once had a deam where I was trying to sleep, but this cartoony skull with flame hair, tiny bat wings, and gosilly looking eyes wouldn't let me, and kept laughing at me. God that thing was annoying.
Second time, I would probably take a swing at her jaw. I once almost did that to my sister. I missed, so it was alright.
2030360 Truthfully i would scream like a little girl and try to run away.
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And then Luna will laugh.
But really, I would also freek out once I fully wake up in this scenario.
2030411 HAHAAH! dude that would weird running from Luna while the neighbors just watch me get chased by a magical talking horse that would end pretty funny and i would laugh later after i go to the hospital.
shape shitting soldiers...
2070772 HAHAHA thnx for pointing that out something didn't seem right with what was written until i read it again....God my brain has the derp!
wtf, the royal consort? did i miss smething?
2072485 Remember she keeps calling him a prostitute,concubine and others she will not let that drop and later....he gets his revenge only for it to backfire....MUWAHAHAHAHAHAAH!
2073430oh, right... now i remember... i sense mock sexy times in the future. i. love. trollestia
when do you expect the next chapter to be up?