Five years previously the Canterlot Symphony Hall burned to the ground in mysterious circumstances...
Although the culprit was suspected, no trace of them could be found...
It was assumed they died in the fire. But that was not the case…
(Inspired by the Musical "Love Never Dies")
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In the second large paragraph you list the fire as happening 10 years ago instead of 5. Might want to fix that.
And Phantom of the Opera, staring Vinyl. You have my attention.
1861720 eep, thanks for pointing that out, I decided to change it to a smaller time scale halfway through writing and thought I'd changed all the references to time scales. Good thing you've got better eyesight than I could ever hope for!
Interesting start you have here. Good Job, keep up the good work!
1862634 Thank you very much dear chap, much appreciated!
Can you put some sort of indicator when you change point of view from one group to another, like a line across the page. It would make it much easier to read.
Other than that it looks good so far.
Oh, right. I had been double spacing it when it cut to a different perspective, but if that doesn't show up well enough format wise then I'll change it. Thanks for letting me know!
This makes me so bummed out but the story itself is so freaking good. I shall be waiting anxiously
1951905 Oh no! Now I feel like I have a standard to follow!
You shouldn't have to wait to long till the next chapter though. Two weeks tops!