• Member Since 16th Oct, 2011
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"It all comes back to Princess Luna, since Celestia is interested in learning about ethereal magic, such as friendship. Luna has begun devoting herself to learning the magical properties of physical creatures... So, Banshees, Griffons, Hydras, and most importantly, at least as far as I'm concerned, Dragons."

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Stoneheart is Luna's first student, well, student may not be the best word for him. She didn't teach him from youth, but she still trusts him. At least as much as Celestia trusts her student. In reality, Stoneheart is a scholar, teaching, exploring and researching by order of Princess Luna. Hoping to change all of Equestria's perspective on the most mystical of all creatures, Dragons.

And now he's received a special assignment, go to Ponyville, a location in which there have been more dragon sightings reported in the past year then most places see in twenty, and do research on its residents. But there is more to this assignment than meets the eye, a major event for Dragonkind is on the horizon and Stoneheart is somehow implicated...

And Twilight Sparkle has graciously accepted to host him.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 10 )

I like it, it's pretty well written, has a nice flow to it, and I like the OC.

I agree now lets see if the rest of the story will be good people tend to go down hill sometimes after the first chapter but i think you should be fine...so kick some ass and entertain everyone that reads your stories :yay:

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It's funny you mention that, I have had that problem in the past but have been working as hard as possible to avoid it here. I have a proof reader now, and am using the scattered writing method as well as writing by hand first to allow me personally to have an editing process as well.

I'll do my best to keep you entertained.

Marvelous work, a five star story indeed. You do an excellent job of making Stoneheart likable, but not perfect. I also enjoy the writing style very much, it keeps me entertained. Continue on, I can't wait for what happens next.

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I don't know if I'm really tired or what. But that made me laugh WAY harder than it should have. Thank you for making my day. :twilightsmile:

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