Princess Celestia just revealed pokemon to all of equestria. Everypony's life have been excellent then. Twilight, who is studying ghost pokemon. Fluttershy, Loving Grass and Bug types. Rainbow dash, Having extremely fast races with her flying types. Pinkie pie, Having fun in life with her poison types. Rarity, With her dazzling ice types. Applejack, And her fighting types always love to harvest apples the apple family way. But one team have used pokemon for evil, the discordians. The team have been trying to revive discord.
Okay, I know about the new discord episode, But, I'm going to say this is way before discord turned into a good draconequus. I also have rewritten it.
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In the first paragraph I believe you meant "Rainbow Dash was not that excited." Not exciting.
Also this is weirdest freaking thing...to ever exist...You should be proud
Whoah... This actually hurt to read. You said to point out any grammatical or spelling errors, but there are far too many to count. I am not even a fan of Pokemon at all, I just review new stories posted here. You're going to have to do a full re-write of the story, because it is riddled with mistakes like crazy. I highly suggest that you find a decent pre-reader/proofreader, as it will help you immensly. I would go into more detail, but I want to eat an orange now, and I don't really feel like taking out the time for it. Best of luck to you.
- The Gentle Colt, crusader of pure love and tolerance.