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TKM
Uh hi. I look at things and I write things. I love you.
TKM
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...well then......get the lube
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Pretty sure this fits perfectly.
Haha ok I'm hoping you're joking right... Right?... Right?!
Needs a proofreader. Other than that, seems promising.
not bad
ill be tracking
lets see where this fic goes shall we. (Tracking)
Cannot tell if Troll fic, or actual story in development...
Anyways, MOAR!!!!
Thank god. Anne was a bitch.
1741875 ANNE BARELY DID ANYTHING
1743147 Haha IKR?
Boobs on a stick.
Name's Jack.
Pleasure to make Your acquaintance.
Just some advice, you shouldn't repeat a character's name every sentence. It just makes the entire thing feel awkward.
Try this instead
There are some other small things, but that seems to be your main problem. If you need some help, or an editor feel free to ask.
That was pretty dickish in the start