When Dipper finds a map hidden in his great uncle Stan's store the Mystery Shack he discovers that the Everfree forest lies in the depths of Gravity Falls. Realizing that no one has explored this forest, Dipper convinces his sister Mable, his great uncle Stan, and Stan's two employees Wendy and Soos to go on an expedition to be first ones to explore this forest. After making it through the Everfree forest and all the dangerous mythological beast that call the Everfree their home. The five find themselves in Equestria after departing the Everfree forest, and well a lot of random stuff happens can't describe any other way.
Also if anyone wants to do a cover for my story that would be nice.
The one I'm using is a random artwork I found, its not mine credit to whoever made it, but I don't mind replacing it with a cover made for this story.
Also anyone intested in editing my story, I need the help.
Any contructive critism would be nice since this is my first published story on this site.
Holy Buck Batmare that was fast for this croosover. I may have seen 1 and a half episodes but I like it. I will like to see where this is going. The cover actually makes sense
HA The call me maybe song reference
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In case you were wondering, in this case Mabel's name is spelled "Mabel". Oh, but great story!
I think it could use a little revising.
1. You seem to be slipping between past and present tense.
2. Throw in quotes when you have sign text.
3. Have another look through it for spelling mistakes and rewrite it a little so it looks a little less like how you might say it. Sentences can become quite run-on if you do that.
Other than that the story's looking good! Keep writing!
It is actually spelled "Mabel" instead of "Mable" just so you know but the story is really great!
Are you going to make more chapters I am really interested!
I need more
i was wondering if someone was gonna do this also once i get Microsoft office ill proof for you
I love both of these shows
I wanted to write one of these too
But I think yours is a LOT better than mine
Hey, I just faved you, and this is crazy! But here's my story, so fav me maybe?
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41018/My-Little-Four-Sword%3A-Teamwork-is-Magic
Copy paste i think XD
I only have one question...
Do you like bannanas?
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Well to be fair, her name rhymes with Table, so it's very easy to assume that they would spell it like that
Totally relevant picture
The next thing you should make should be something like this:
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Featuring the Mane 6 and Harry Potter.
MOAR!!!
why 'on Hiatus'...
Besides for a few grammer errors, the story is very nice.
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Late for first comment?!
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Anyways appealing story I'm making a MLP/Gravity Falls Fanfiction X3
This is awesome!
Five reasons why I like this:
5. It's awesome
4. It's awesome
3. It's awesome
2. It's awesome
1. It's 20% Cooler than all those awesomes combined.
Don't worry, my first story was short too.
YEAH UPDATE!
*reads rest of the chapter*
... WTF?
FYI, the whole "random stuff happening on a daily basis" that gravity falls is known for is originally done by Regular Show. GF really isn't anything new for that matter.
This is still a good concept though.
gravity falls + MLP!! = me gusta
Continuez plz.
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Actually, it's a trope that has repeated itself long before either Gravity Falls or Regular Show. The execution of the trope, however, is unique for each one.