this is a story of Siris, a human boy of 16 living in New York City with his little sister May his average life plays through it's usual close calls but changes when a strange old man pays him an unexpected visit and from thereon Siris continues his average day no different if not a bit creeped out on top of exhausted...but when all is said and done and the sun has set he finds himself being Questioned by a voice and sent on a crash course to a new and beautiful Strange world; where he meets it's less-than-your-average locals and as he continues to reside there, coping with the new scenery and behaviors around him, more and more bizarre happenings and new discoveries are revealed...but as he continues to discover more and more, he learns the difficulties some of us face or have faced in our lives and are as real as the magic that Equestria holds, and learns he needs to take more responsibility then he's had ever before, and puts his heart, his strength and his mind to the utmost test
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That description is the run-on sentence from hell.
hmm favorited poor person had a dream where my sister died two nights ago worst part was that it was my fault i lived thirteen years longer after it occured i always saw memories of what the dream me saw I wasn't even sure if my family was alive or not it coulda been memoreies a thirteen year old child that already wants to kill himself shouldn't see that
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Wait, whut?
701937 same thing as his dream thing his sister died in his dream because he left in my dream my sister died from a fire I started
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That's...a really, really shitty dream.
701980 yeah worst part was noone cared that she was dead but me yeah then I saw all the memories of what happened I was pretty sure all my family was dead thirteen years later when the memories commeneced I saw the ashes of where my sister sied it was some kinda apple orchard from what I understand the apple family ended up on earth and moved next door the I accidentally started a fire my life filled with so much spite that it made me feel horrid (and I'm farely spiteful) yeah not the best dream for a 13 year old that already wants to kill myself
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Seriously, please don't kill yourself; it's really not the best idea.
uh yea, definitely not , you've got all of us to make you feel better
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this was worth EVERY SECOND
Thanks for the great read. I enjoyed it very much.
still need to work on my stories
757944 well you keep going then and keep spreading my story please!!!!!
757954 k stupid ps3 typing
hehe...it's ok...i get what you mean and thank you and keep it up!
good chapter theres just one thing though.......
DEAR HOLY MOTHER OF CELESTIA WALL OF TEXT!!!!!!!!!
IT BUUUUURNS!
in other non dramatic terms that was massive wall of text. try to remember to add more spaces cause unfrortuanly for some people it can be difficult or uncomftorble to read
It's interesting, but one tip: Please, don't write a textwall, it's very uncomfortable to read. Separate each character's talk, actions and when the new action begins.
“w-well you can hop on my back and I could fly you there?”
giggity he's riding her
Good good.
GuardianEternal you need to bring this story back its to good to leave like this.
GREAT STUFF !!!!!