In this story we have a young man who as found himself as a nobody in his world only to learn he was not originally from that world.....and when he is taken to this "other world" he was meant to be in what will he do, how will he act, what will others think of him, and will he be helpful to the inhabitants or will he be a deadly enemy to them all? During his journey towards learning his role in this world he finds many things that explain the reason his life was so horrible and he makes some allies to help him in the long run...including some that make others question his alignment.
Chapters (18)
Here is the first of many chapers....actual greeting formalities with ponies will begin on chap 3 and onward.....
if you notice any mistakes that bug you just tell me and I will fix it
hmmm,,,,,,certainly interesting so far, i look forward to where this goes.....
.............and lol pure......pillow....
this looks interesting
pretty epic
YES!
nice first impression...............pure's gona be pissed im sure lol
836510 What she doesnt know wont hurt her
.........yes i would say he is......if he can think about the situation quickly enough it'll come im sure.....oh and kei's colored mods remind me of jak 3.......good game....
841862 a couple of friends said I should make a ref to certain things and glad you found that one.....let's see how many more you can find.
shining buster.......finish buster......trunks.....?
well the liberal shit has taken aim at the fan..........
895229 trunks who now?
895483
DBZ.......somethings r hard to forget......
895500 lol?
895517
.......awkward?..........
895529 In a way yes, but hilarious in another
sorry for taking to long with the chapters just things happening with my computer and it's starting to get annoying
oh shit man this guy doset give a shit dose he.
959682is cool just take your time we won't hate you.............................................much
969564 Baron can't feel much emotion at the moment only certain ones, but that's only because of his link with Ruby/Searing Flames
i have no clue da fuq happend at the end
1020289 you'll find out when the time comes
1020477if you say so
breaking the fourth wall in this after hours/behind the scenes/bloopers like chapter.
dafuq did i just read derp
after a lot of rewriting i finally got what was supposed to be something else finally done.
even more editing done due to other problems
man i havent written anything in forever lol
1859788 when will you release another chapter i have been waiting forever.This story is to good to die.
2809076 I will it's just taking longer then needed...but i have not given up on this story...its just with school over i thought i finally got a break but then my rent's go up and are like "HOW'D YOU LIKE TO PLAN FIVE OF YOUR COUSINS PARTIES AND STEP SIS'S WEDDING!"
"Can I choose against it?"
"NOPE WE ALREADY SIGNED YOU UP AND EVERYTHING!"
"...Fuck my life..." and with that I lost EVEN MORE TIME...also sorry for the late reply.
3110927 No is cool bro as long as you plan on finishing.