• Member Since 21st Mar, 2012
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ptrikle


I do it 4 teh lulz

Comments ( 23 )

1685981 And here I was thinking I beat you to the punch.

Why is there anyone in all of existence who likes the idea of Spike getting raped? There are some sick people in this fandom.

You include a Richard Nixon x Granny Smith pairing, but failed to include a reference to Watergate. (i.e. "As he lapped at her labia, Nixon braced himself for a second Watergate.") I'm gonna have to deduct some points for that.

Overall, I can give the story a thumbs up, in spite of its flaws.

I did like that you included a Shakespeare x Zecora pairing. You should consider writing a spinoff story involving Zecora. I'd like to see her in a three way; getting spit roasted by Shakespeare and Dr. Seuss.

inb4regi- oh :rainbowwild:

1685981 :rainbowkiss:

1686044 You should feel bad for being an asshole :moustache:

1686050

I'd like to see her in a three way; getting spit roasted by Shakespeare and Dr. Seuss.

I'd pay money to see that. :moustache:

1686044

"Why is there anyone in all of existence who likes the idea of Spike getting raped? There are some sick losers in this fandom. You should feel bad for wasting everyone's time."

Is this the same MarshmallowSundae who wrote Their Last Day of School?

You know, the fanfic where Twilight Sparkle tortures children and molests Spike. It includes such charming lines as:

"Fresh tears leaked down Spike's scaly cheeks, yet it wasn't long before his whimpering turned inevitably to moans and his body reacted to the gentle, stimulating touch of Twilight's soft hoof....
...Once the baby dragon was standing at full mast against his will, Twilight raised her rump from where it was seated on his legs and slid herself onto him with a firm shove, straddling his hips and connecting their bodies."

I'm not gonna judge your fic. You're free to create whatever stories you want to write. All I'm asking for is consistency before you critique another person's work.

I came. Thrice.

1686050 Yes. So much yes.

1686092 I'm not an asshole, i just play on on the internet. Perhaps sometimes I do get carried away, though. My bad.

1686190 Ahhh, ya got me. But in my defense, the rape in this story and mine is totally different. In mine, he was raped by a lady. this logic makes perfect sense inside my head.

More importantly, it had the appropriate dark tag on it.

1693308 there's nothing dark about this story. It's beautiful... in it's own special way...

1697101 oh thanks, bro

1697567 Remember: "it's" means "it is" or "it has". "its" is possessive :moustache:

1699616 Sometimes, I dream about cheese.

1702705 Sometimes, I turn on noclip and shoot the void :moustache:

Gr8 b9 m10, I r11 it 12/13.
Oh, by the way, Squarks says "fuck you." :fluttercry::fluttershbad::pinkiecrazy::twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

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