I'm more of an artist than a writer so any helpful critisim is wonderful!
Vinyl Scratch feels stuck in her life. She has the fame and the luxuries that other ponies can only dream of but all she wants is friends. Can Vinyl learn the difference between the kind of friends that she wants and the kind of friends she needs? *Song Lyics referring to the chapter will be used at the beginning of each chapter, the name and artist of the song will be named at the end of the chapter in the author's note as well, Song suggestions are encouraged*
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Well written intro, hope to see it update soon.
I love this, its very well written for one and it sounds like the plot will get very interesting!
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Watching this one.
Not bad, not bad....but they're shades!
xD kidding...mostly. I expect great things from you Mr. Elaruki, great things indeed 
Good story, not so great song choice.
Just choose a good song next time.
Otherwise, will follow and like.
1658747 tehe my memory sucks so it just kinda came out "glasses" when I have a free moment I plan on going through and replacing "glasses" with "shades"
1659019 if you have any favorite songs leave me a link and i'll find a way to put a lyric from it into a chapter!
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Anything by The Beatles, really
Obla-di Obla-da is a good one.
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Hmmmmmmm. I shall go on a lyric hunt now! thank you good sir!
This is very well written.
The intro really pulled me in. Gotta love Vinyl Scratch
Cant wait for it to be updated!
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soon! oh so soon! like right now. Short chapter. lol
" giggled over a light yellow colored stallion with a blue mane sneezing nonstop over a pile of
My chest ached."
It seems as if you missed something here
Just letting you know! But I'm interested to see what will be happening next
So far so goooooooooood :D
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oops. that's what i get for editing at one in the morning. thank ye very much for that catch!
No problem
The walls of text get a little annoying, but that is all I can really see wrong at this moment.
Also, great story so far, can't wait to see me
1683854 glad you like, hopefully i should be cutting down on my textwall habit as more dialogue comes in. Til then, i shall proceed to rape the enter button for you
Yes, rape that thing till there is nothing left!
Mwuahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
keep it coming
Not a bad start for a Vinyl fic! I'm liking the feeling you're putting into this, and I like how you wrote the scenes Vinyl saw in town. I like what you have here so far. The only thing that could ruin this, at least for me as a reader, would be making it another VSXRD or VSXOS ship. I hope you plan on taking this in a different direction than most, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with!
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Dont worry demon! The direction i plan to take this im hoping will be different than the expected!
That song is so awesome.
And wow I love this story, Excuse me while I go get it more views.
I think you deserve them!
1905596 Wow! Im so glad you like it so much! I promise to keep it coming and it will just keep getting better!
Hmm.
I already don't like Rave Storm. Insulting Pinkie Pie? This guy reeks one-night stands...or worse. Grr.
Good chapter ^_^
I really like this. Faved for a great intro, and for making me feel her emotions. Great job!
Good second chapter.
1906219 Yeah, anyone that insults Pinkie Pie, I have a problem. Rave Storm is a prick.
Great third chapter. I like how you are slowly building the pace of this story, while still making it interesting to read. Looking forward to helping you with it.
Glad that situation was stopped when it was.... Pretty good, hope the song fit the atmosphere.
Happy that you stopped when you did. There are enough fanfics where Vinyl's a druggy and such.
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amen to that.
I see a drug filled party about to go down someone better snitch like a bitch
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I second that