• Member Since 5th Jul, 2012
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Lady Spider


I'm more of an artist than a writer so any helpful critisim is wonderful!

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Life plays horrible tricks on ponies. Easel Inkwell was a lonely, shy filly. Her only friend was liked by everypony and was sure to go far in life. When he is unexpectedly removed from her life, Easel was changed in a way that threatened her entire way of life
Eight years later, she’s still struggling with the side effects. Time has passed though and whether she likes it or not, life is continuing to play its games.
Will she finally open up to another pony or will she remain cut off and watching life from the sidelines forever?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

This looks promising. I hope you keep up the good work. :yay:

Um... i had... mixed feelings about this... chapter... Good writing, Elaruki... :applejackunsure:

I'm loving the internal conversations

Good work Elaruki! I love where you're taking this.

Oh fuck that is sad as hell. :fluttershbad:

Very nice work, Ela! A bit rushed with the Luna bit, but good all around. I love what you did with this. Fantastic.

Elise... I'm not going anywhere. When you need me, just call.
Something like this couldn't have been easy to think about, let alone write. Thank you. Thank you very much for sharing this with us.

You and tyler are in my prayers:raritycry: god bless you

I can't know how you feel, but your story of memory and lose... has reminded me of my own feelings... and I thank you for sharing such a touching story.

I'm not by any means an emotional person but this put tears in my eyes. I have felt similar pain but not on such a big level as you have. Thank you for sharing this story.

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