Rarity is sent to the psych hospital after a fire started while Sweetie Belle is cooking Rarity breakfast in bed, killing her parents and Sweetie Belle alike. There, she meets AppleJack, her caretaker. They fall madly in love with each other, but then they are forced never to see each other again. What will they do? What will happen? You gotta read to find out ;)
Renamed from The Broken Heart Chronicles: Rarijack, A Story of Insanity and Love
Also Facade helped me write or rewrite this fanfic.
Chapters (4)
I don't know why there are so many dislikes.
The story seems to be moving a little fast but it's quite good. I rather like the idea of it.
Don't get discouraged as many authors are!
Just stick with it. I am enjoying this story so far.
Liked.
3117253 thanks :) and i wont get discouraged
and now I wait.................*sighs* this is going to be long wait
3293433 I know, I'm sorry. I have a serious case of writers block. My cowriters and I haven't worked for a while, but I'm going to restart my work. Don't worry about the wait, because I had already started the chapter. Hopefully the wait is not too long.
grandioso me encanto tu forma de narrar y pobre rareza me destroza verla así
espero el próximo capitulo con ansias
3458162 ¡Gracias! Espero presentar un capítulo más pronto ...
Okay i reed it
3466439 Oki!
grandioso capitulo sigue así
solo que me destroza ver a rareza en esta cituacio y espero con ansias los momentos de applejack y rareza
3528596 Gracias! Ya sabes, se lo agradezco a todos de tomar el tiempo para leer mi escritura horrible.
cual horrible es trsite la historia del finc no puedo ni imaginar lo que es perder a tu familia de una manera ta terrible pero es hermoso la forma en que describes que rareza intenta ser fuerte sigue asi
great so far....NOW ON TO THE NEXT CHA--oh wait it's not out yet
darn it
3534238 Chapter 3 is on!
algo corto pero perfecto como siempre me enamoro la forma con la que te expresas grandioso sigue así
Poor Rarity.
It's a good thing she has a freind like AJ to be there for her.
3545925 yeah :( I feel bad for putting her in this situation...