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TacticalRainboom


I wrote some stories for you. I hope you enjoy them.

Comments ( 16 )

This ain't porn. It is labeled Mature because, after much soul-searching, I realized that I refuse to censor myself.

*looks at rating*
:ajbemused:Then why is it rated everyone?:trollestia:

I shall read this later. The brief amount of time I spent scanning was a good 'un. :pinkiehappy: But the rating is confusing...

It's a nice start, and I eagerly await the next part :D

Ahhh you finally released this! Can't wait for the next part.

Dude, heads up, you forgot to set the rating to mature.

Also while I'm here I might as well give feedback.

It's good. Not the best written I've ever seen, but far from the worst. I'm also trusting you, I know you'll get better once you hit stride.

Also you have Fluttershy tagged in this as well, and if my powers of inference are working, this is heading in a direction very much relevant to my interests. Not to mention I'm a complete sucker for stories about flight school.

I'll be watching and hoping. This looks like it'll be fun.

Woohoo! All the feels :ajsmug:

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Whoa. The mods missed that one.

Now I'm tempted to set the rating to Teen because, come on, this is SO not a clopfic.

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You could try, but you've already had a claw in vagina incident. Knowing you a little, this will probably go further, but more than that you'll want the option to go further if the mood takes you.

Just tag it mature and avoid all the potential complications. Well, that's what I'd do.

1738417 Seriously, dude. I would change this to Mature and put the sex tag there as well. A claw in vagina incident is a bit far for teen...

So! This has another re-imagining of Cloudchaser. I love Cloudchaser. She's the second or third sexiest pony in the show. I'm allowed to re-use her. Shut up.

Also, this has a repeat of the thick pidgin from the intro chapter of 6th age. It's a shout-out to my hometown and it communicates the idea of thick local slang nicely. Pretend that the 6th age character is speaking a dialect that was created by similar conditions. Shut up.

1739268 I've said this already, but I love your Cloudchaser so damn much. Keep up the awesome work.

she became a badass, and she wanted to make sure there wasn’t a pony in the whole camp who didn’t know it.

The bolded "there" was missing :) Great story, cloud chaser is sexy, gotta agree with you :raritywink:
Can't wait for the next chapter, gunna watch this one.

This was awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for catching the little derp and I'm glad you liked this! Go 'n read my other stories; a lot of them have the same kind of attitude to them. The next thing I post could be any one of six or seven things. :|

sorry for this but i did just see it why do all stories texts look so bad now? wth is happening to Fimfiction?

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