21-You are in trouble
Chapter 21
Celestia, Cadance, Onyx, Shining Armor and Twillight were all sitting around a table in the throne room. Shining was glaring at Onyx, Cadance was trying not to laugh, Twilight was redder than most of the red apples in Equestria, Onyx was sitting down in a chair, trying to understand and figure out what had happened last night, and Celestia... Celestia was breaking every item she could find in the room. Each time a glass, a vase, or something crashed on the wall, Onyx would jump out of his chair, wishing that his mother wouldn’t throw HIM next.
“HOW COULD YOU DO THAT IN MY BED ONYX! *SHATTER* I SLEEP IN IT YOU KNOW! *Crash* AND, NOT ONLY DID YOU DO THAT IN MY ROOM, BUT IN MY BED, WITH MY STUDENT TOO!.”
Onyx didn’t answer, he knew that he was guilty but in the other side of his brain he was thinking that his mother was over reacting just a little.
“AND YOU... TWILIGHT, I WOULD’VE THOUGHT THAT YOUR BROTHER OR YOUR FAMILY HAD RAISED YOU BETTER THAN THAT!” Twillight was in tears, being told that by her mentor and her idol, was too hard for her.
“Princess! If I may... I don’t think is my family’s fault but more the Prince’s fault, he had taken advantage of her because she was drunk. My sister would never do a thing like that if she was sober.” Shining answered to her.
“Hey! We were both drunk if I remember, and I didn’t take advantage of her. Things just happened and we both lost control of it.”
Celestia smashed another vase on the floor. “YOU ARE A PRINCE ONYX OF EQUESTRIA! EVEN DRUNK YOU NEED TO ACT AS IF ALL THE PONIES OF EQUESTRIA WAS WATCHING YOU!.”
Cadance couldn’t keep herself from laughing anymore, she erupted in a laughing fit.
“H-h-he..., you two in HER bed!? Ha, ha,ha,ha, and you got caught! HA, HA, HA, HA, That’s the best one I’ve heard this year. I haven’t laughed like that since Blueblood lost his tail in a bet.”
“Honey! This isn’t something to laugh about! This... PRINCE!... has taken advantage of my sister!”
“Oh calm down, like Onyx had said; they were both drunk, and by what I’ve heard from my room last night, they both enjoyed each other.” As if it was possible, Twilights face became even redder.
“Wait WHAT?! You heard us?!” Onyx screamed.
“Well yeah, but I didn’t know that it was you. And you Shining, you shouldn’t be upset, when we did it for the first time, it was on your sisters bed.” Onyx, burst out laughing and Shining was now red like his sister.
“You did WHAT in MY bed?!” Twilight yelled to her brother.
“Heh, heh, heh,... Um, listen sister... you were sleeping on the couch... and my room is far too close to our parents room so they could’ve heard us... and it was before I moved out with Cadance... so um...”
Twilights mane burst in fire and she looked really, angry. Even Onyx moved back a little... just in case.
“HOW DARE YOU GROUND ME, IF YOU DID THE SAME THING!!!!!!” Shining was sweating a little and looked a little stressed as Twilight screamed at him.
“I said I was sorry, and that still doesn’t change the fact that he took advantage of you. H-”
“HE DID NOT TAKE ADVANTAGE OF ME, I WANTED TO DO IT!” Shining was now speechless. He tried to find something to say but nothing came out. Twillight walked out of the room, leaving her brother behind. Cadance rose up and followed her.
“I will go talk with her, I’m sure she will listen.” she said beore she closed the door behind her.
“I think I will go too... I have new recruit to train.” Shining trotted out leaving Celestia and Onyx in the room.
“Well... I think I uhm.... will go clean my room” Onyx quickly said, rising up from his seat, but Celestia made him sit again with her magic.
“Tut tut tut, trust me you will not get away that easily, we need to talk about how a prince of equestria should act.”
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Twillight was crying in the library, she tried to find a book to help her to deal with what she has done, but she found nothing and now everypony thinks bad of her.
“Twillight are you here? ”Cadance entered the library and took a seat close to Twillight and hugged her.
“*sniff* Cadance... what I did... I ruined everything...My brother will hate me, Celestia will hate me too and Onyx will probably not want to see me anymore” Cadance kissed the forehead of Twillight.
“What? are you talking about? Sure Celestia was looking angry, but I’m sure she was just more shocked than anything. And for your brother, he is just over protective, if he doesn’t forgive you I swear on Celestia that we will not share the same bed...if you know what I mean.”
“Ewww... I don’t want to think about that.” Cadance laughed and hugged her.
“So tell me, how was he? Is his stalionhood diferent from our stallions?”
“Cadance!!! Why do you want to know?” Twillight asked, blushing heavily.
“Well first he is my cousin and second, I’m the princess of love so is natural to want to know how he is in bed”
Twillight face-hoofed.
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Back in the throne room.
“So you have heard me Onyx, no more drunk romance and I want you to go apologize to Shining Armor AND Twillight for what you have done.”
“Yes mom...”
“And don’t forget, tomorow I will teach you how to act as a royal, I will teach you how to speak different languages, and wich mare you should be with and the one you should not.”
“Yes mom”
“Good... now... tell me...How was it?”
“Wait, what? MOM!”
“Hey you are my son... I just wanted to know how it was for you... It’s not a big deal.”
“Mom thats not a thing we talk about just like that!”
“Well you did it in MY bed, so I think I have the right to ask some questions”
" MOM!!"
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Haha, oh this was a god chapter!
I vote Luna!
I want to see a awkward explanation to Celestia.
onyx x twilight. if not then onyx x mane 6. i want him to be with twilight and if he cant be with just her then he will have her with others at the same time.
Ha! Dat ending.
You need to improve your grammar, though.
OnyxXTwiley
L
O
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Strangest chapter ever. I have a feeling this story is slightly going to get a bit disorganized, but we'll see
2183309 Well I personally beilive it was a Jesus chapter, but y'know.
2183320
This.
onyx and twilight is the only way I think
2183320 Now that's a conversation I'd love to see. I second Lunyx
Onyx x Twilight all the way!
I know it's not a vote. But I vote OnyxXLuna anyway.
However, I bet it's OnyxXOC. Just makes more sense from a probability perspective.
1st choice OnyxXTwiley. 2nd Choice OnyxXMane6 preferably Dash.
luna or mane 6
OCxLuna has been done to death and a harem is messy. Aside from that anyone else
OnyxXLuna and OnyxXTwiley and also if posible OnyxXCrysalis
For a normal relationship you have to do Onyx x Twilight but for all that is holy you have to do a one night stand of Onyx x Luna! DO IT!!! DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT!!!
I vote for the Mane 6 pairing because it is totally underused! Time to join the herd, everypony!
It has to be Twiley!!!!!! Also does Celestia know about all the scars on his back or all the abuse that the griffons did to him?
Twinyx please
If not then lunyx
*HAHAHA* Cant... *HAHAHA* Breath... *HOHOHO* for Laughing... 100x
That was a good one, now then I'll vote for Twilight.
Pfft
like you gotta ask, OnyxXTwiley of course
great chapter
also, i think Onyx-X-Twilight would be best now.
onyx-X-luna would be hella wierd.
one of the wonderbolts would be cool
personally, i think it's too early for a romance, let onyx behave at least a little proper and just don't go off to find some romance.
it would be pretty funny if some of the mares in the castle were flirting a little bit but keep in mind that you wouldn't just start to flirt with royalty just like that, be discrete.
also, would you please include how tall he is? is he taller than celestia? if he isn't then how much shorter is he?
Onyx x mane6 when in doubt go with the harem end :P
I vote for OnyxXMane6, maybe with the exception of Rarity who could go for Spike. That, or at least OnyxXTwiley.
I vote for twilight, though the luna choice seems tempting, awkward situation is bound to happen.
I vote OnyxXTwilight!
What would that ship be called? Twilyx?
Suggestions, anyone?
Oh, and, OnyxXTwiley.
I AGREE WITH Rain Fire! ONE NIGHT STAND WITH LUNA! OHGOD! I CAN ALREADY PICTURE WHEN CELESTIA FINDS OUT!
But for the serious relationship i would say Rarity, i have nothing against Twilight but if the real story starts now, then i would want RarityxOnyx, because fuck you Blueblood.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
voting OnyxXTwiley
I think his experience in the griffin kingdoms would push Onyx/Gilda out of the way.
Onyx/Luna would be wierd, reason being, Luna is his aunt after all.
Onyx/Mane 6 would be okay if you can build around if properly.
Onyx/OC/Twilight/Rarity are the most likely in my mind.
-Mis
20 for OnyxXTwiley
I put my bet on Onyx&Twilight as it would be the most logical way to go.
TwilightxOnyx = TwOnix?
OnyxXTwilight
i vote Onyx X Twilight cause I'm a sucker for childhood romances growing into more
so says the seeker of power
Hurray, everything end out fine. And Celestia forgive her son, I can almost sense a hint of pride off him. Now he IS part of the family. Men Candace must feel so close to Onyx now, both of them, now have a interesting story to tell and laugh in the future. Oh and my both goes with OnyxXRarity and if it can't be OnyxXRarityXFluttershy (I think he can get along with Shy)
P.S: If you can and think is fitting can you put this little bit of dialog in the end of this chapter?
(Right after Onyx yell MOM)
Oh come on Onyx, we both are adults, is not big deal
If it is not a big deal, then tell me. Did you did it in grandmas bedroom?
Of course not! I didn't do it in moms bed…I did it in moms throne Celestia turn and blush, she turn and look his son again
a-a-and that is why you should learn to act as a prince, believe me a royal scandal is something I don't wish even Discord
2183320THIS.
Luna for the explanation.
do a 1 night stand of luna
i vote for twilightxonyx
Are you people forgetting that Luna is technically his auntie? Well anyway Silver_fang is it safe to assume you aren't going with the pairing you originally told me about? She's not on your list of choices, so what's the deal?
The troll has laid the bait lets see what happens sall we?
2183446 http://t.qkme.me/364iod.jpg
I vote for Luna! PLOX PLOX PLOX PLOX PLOX PLOX PLOX PLOX PLOX PLOX PLOX.
onyxxtwi all the way since celestia acted WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY too much like a mom protecting a new born baby. onxy has every right to do or see who he wants to be with. she has no ground on that subject. but yet, if onxy has a father, celestia would of been less.......mom when this happen lol
i won't lie. i want to see onxyxcelestia even more xD and maybe onxyxluna and xmane6
We got the rest of the royalty here why not Onyx x Luna?
If she were there, I'm sure Luna would've mentioned Celestia's old nickname.
This chapter
OnyxXTwiley
2183518
their not related u know that right? so its less...."incest"