48- Onyx's Diary
Chapter 48
Dear Diary,
Yes, I started to write a diary. Never would I have thought that I would have my own secret book: Though after what happened to me, I realised that if someday I died, I would leave nothing behind. So that is the reason why I am sitting here in my room, writing with a feather from Philomena, who was kind enough to let me borrow one.
I don’t have so much experience in this kind of stuff, so I will do my best to write clearly what I’m trying to say.
First of all, when we came back from the council, Luna and threw us a small, private party for the family. Well, most of the time me and mom where just with each other, appreciating that fact that we were both together in our house, far away from this monster that they call Emperor. I even slept in her bed, like I used to do when I was younger and had nightmares.
Well, I guess this is all for the first entry. See you tomorrow Diary.
Onyx, Son of Celestia
Written on the 24th of Crystalia
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Dear Diary,
Once again Twilight refused to listen to me. I tried to pay her a visit and explain to her that what she saw was a mistake, but as soon as I knocked on her door, I got teleported back to Canterlot. I guess that is what happen when your mare friend is the student of the most powerful living being. But I will not give up.
Onyx, Son of Celestia
Written on the 27th of Crystalia
Dear Diary,
I don’t know how to react, I mean what happened was not my fault...Or was it...I just don’t know...Maybe I should explain to you what happened. This morning, I finally convinced Twilight to talk to me with the help of somepony named Pinkie Pie. We both had talked for a long time, I explained her what have really happened but in the end she decided that it would maybe be a better idea to just stay friends for awhile. Of course I accepted, Twilight was my best friend since I was 7 years old.
I think tonight will be passed in my room, I kinda don’t want to see anypony else, and especially not Cadance. She always with Shining Armor and seeing him will make me think of Twilight.
Onyx
Written on the 4th of Sun Festif.
Dear Diary,
Mom finally convinced me to get out of my room and do something else than mope to myself. I guess she is right. I mean it is not by doing nothing that something will change between me and Twilight.
I don’t really have much to say today.
Onyx, Son of Celestia
Written on the 6th of Sun Festif
Dear Diary,
I can’t stand my cousin anymore, Always talking about wedding or dress, not leaving me alone and asking me tons of thing like: Do you think he will prefer Chocolate or vanilla? Should I buy more than one? etc… I know I have promised to help but I think she is overdoing it. Just because I'm a male does not mean that I know which edible pastry that Shining will prefer….I sure hope that Cadence will never put her hooves on this book or she will kill me.
Onyx, Son of Celestia
Written on the 13th of Sun Festif
Dear Diary,
Today was the weirdest day I ever had. It all started this morning after I woke up. When I have turned on the shower, and instead of hot water coming out of it, it was cold chocolate milk. CHOCOLATE MILK! How is that even possible. First I thought it was a unicorn who had messed up a spell, but why would a unicorn do magic over the water system. Then came the time for the family breakfast, like every monday, mom was not here and when I asked Luna where she was, she only answered me with something about an old friend, or was it foes… I Could not hear well because Blueblood was yelling (again) at one of the maids about how he could not clean himself this morning because his bath was filled with butter. Suddenly the cold chocolate fountain in my room was not so bad.
After breakfast, I returned to my room for continue the painting I started one month ago. I don’t know why, but every color I was trying to draw was reversed. When I was using some yellow it turned red, the blue was green and the brown was now pink. It frustrated me so much that I chose to leave the paint and go read a book in the royal library.
On my way I saw a guard patrol that was stopped in the middle of the alley because apparently somepony decided to add some itching powder inside of their armor.
The rest of my day was kinda normal though, I found a book in the library that was talking about old legend and mythology which was really interesting. After a small snack bring by the maid, I made my way to mom’s room to wish her a goodnight, but for the first time in my life she refused to let me enter in her room. I think I could heard her crying. I don’t know why, but I feel like I missed something important today.
Onyx, Son of Big Flank Celestia Big Flank Big Big BIG!!
Written on the 22th of Sun Festif.
Onyx you should not leave your Diary on your desk or somepony could read it.
XXX
Your mother.
ps: Are you not too old for have so many plushies on your bed?
Written on the 3rd of Gryflius
Dear Diary,
Twilight kissed me on the cheek today! Maybe there is still hopes for us to be in couple again.
That is all!
Onyx, Son of Celestia
Written on the 11th of Gryflius
Dear Diary,
These dreams… Always the same thing...Always the same three foals. I have talked about this to Luna since she is kinda the expert in the dream domain. Tonight she will try to enter in my dream and help me with them.
Onyx, Son of Celestia
Written on the 20th of Gryflius
Dear Diary,
For once, I am writing to you in the morning. Like I said last night, Luna did enter into my dream to check if everything was alright. As always, I was once again in a small house outside of the city, but this time it was different. Instead of being IN the dream I was WATCHING the dream like if it was a book filled with images. I saw myself sing a lullaby to the youngest one of the kids before wishing her a good night. I saw myself read a story to the one named Fabian, and finally I saw myself trying to calm down the one named Nemeroff. The whole time Luna was by my side, watching everything closely, trying to see if this dream was really just a dream. When the “mother” as I call her, entered the room, everything started to spin in a circle until I woke up back in my room. Luna told me that she did not see anything weird with it, and that if i can’t see the “mother” Is simply because I don't want to.
Thanks Luna, for the precious help…
Onyx, Son of Celestia
Written on the 21 of Gryflius.
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Another one already yay
*Finishes reaeding* disappointment
I love rapid updates
Did you have this one proof read, because if ya diid your editors be slacken.
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told you that it was a small one.
Oh come on! he miss Nighmare AND now Discord? come on, those were great opportunities
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Hahaha The main reason I make him miss that is for follow the Canon, But don't worry he will meet Discord someday!!!!
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You a part of me wish that more humans reach Equestria and take Onix as their king…I will like how the emperor will like to experience the full power of the human rage, specially if they are ninjas or special command like the ones you hired to eliminated plagues if you know what I mean
There's a mistake with the diary, Onix was 7 years old when he met Twily, she was 5
3497619. That right i will go correct it. Tjank
It was a small chapter, but a good one. I hope you write more with Onyx's diary.
Congrats on the Featured box; although, I'm not sure how... Silly algorithms.
Celestia is a very big-flanked horse.
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#420_praise_it
3497552
Yeah... Silver had to add a few replacement editors.
Sadly, my attention has been divided by several, let's say, projects as of late.
Quality control will step up.
3497844 i remember him saying so, he has i believe 4 editors only two were used. I myself edit his other two stories( when he works on them.)
3497876
*tips hat*
3497925 forget to mention this about that picture, but DAT FLANK!
3497844
The coming of sunbutt has gotten here sooner than expected BROTHERS TO ARMS
*righteous barbaric yelling heard through out this comment list*
FOR THE ASS
(sorry it was a good time to do it)
Il était une fois, un ptit Québequois. Il fût transporté dans Equestria. Celestia le trouvaaaa dans la nuit et le froid. Et en Prince Onyx le québequois de-vien-draaaa.
J'ai décidé de fair un barde de moi même aujourd'hui.
3498201
Avec la voix de Roy Dupuis sa decrais etre correct
How is he writing everyday when according to the date it was written on imply many days have past. This is most noticable on the last two entries.
He missed DISCORD!!!
3498490
Did you really wanted to read EVERYDAY of his Diary from the last three month?
3498510
yea...about that...He kinda missed NMM so I guess it is normal
3498510
To tell you the truth, I'm sort of surprised that Discord missed him. I mean seriously, how is the strange creature that your significant other/enemy adopted not your second stop when waking up after 1000 years? (obviously the first stop is to visit said significant other/enemy.)
3498656
Finally someone think about that! Well the answer will be show in the chapter were he will be released
3498418 bein oui j'avais penser a sa
3498744
Discord has to introduce himself to Onyx as his father (as a joke), then go on to describe how he and Celestia dated.
3498628 What i meant to ask is how does it go from the 20th of Gryflius on the night he asks for Luna's help with his dreams to the 15 of Moon Festif the following morning.
3498971
My bad
3498656 That too; unless Celestia begged him not to disturb Onyx, she obviously talked with him after the mane 6 departed to the maze and that is why she was crying in her room.
That Griffon king need to be skinned witha blunt knife for the crimes he commited....to his own citizen no less and to others.
Catching up with this story was 3 days well spent. Much applause to you, good sir.
3501697
Je suis content de voir que ça va presque mieux entre Onyx et Twilight
Oh et très bon chapitre, même si il était petit.
AH HE IS DOUBTING THAT HE AND TWILIGHT WILL BE MARRIED THAT'S WHY HE CAN'T SEE HIS "WIFE" OH GAWD OH LAWD ALMAHGHTY IMA NEED AN UPDATE
By god please get a proofreader
3505220
..lol. Why are you complaining? His writing is easily twice-fold improved from when he started this story. I'm, for lack of a less-familiar term, proud of his improvement.
*Sees new chapters*
IT LIVES!!!
He missed the whole Discord thing? HA
3505783
I know it is, but with such a good story it still hurts .
3512892
I see what you mean.
3513018
I see you see what I see.
3513068>>3513018
I see that you both see something that each other see.
3513341
I see that you see that he sees what I see.
3516107
Onyx is now your new brother! Have fun.
3514754 3513341
I see EVERYTHING! But inversely, everything SEES ME!
3525807
yep
3525807
Rainbow Factory?
i have just gotten time to read it! Amazing 2 chptrs! oh and now im going to yell at you:
WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME THE FOALS NAMES?!?!? I THOUGHT WE WERE FRIENDS?!?!
nvm don't read it... Just PM me when you have time
SO. MANY. COMMAS. As a piece of friendly advice, you should look into proper comma usage. Chiefly, because I see this issue much in your writing, you should look into when you are supposed to use two commas in a sentence. Sometimes commas aren't even needed in a sentence at all. Either way, I look forward to future stories from you.
EDIT: Wait, Est-ce que vouz ĕtes Francais?
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I'm a french Canadian. That why my grammar is not that good XD