• Member Since 19th Feb, 2012
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Armalite


I'm eighteen, I'm in OPP, I live the thug life, I smoke weed every day, I don't take shit from nobody, and I write fanfiction for a show about magical ponies.

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It's a spiral from sad to tragic with some insanity thrown in. I don't even know why, Fubbles told me to, so I just pulled up Open Office and started writing. Meh, tell me what you all think.:twilightsmile:

"in-winnable fight" should be "un-winnable fight"
"One the forest floor," should be "On the forest floor,"

Pretty well written, has some nice punch. The tomb stone might be a bit wordy though.

1625147 Thanks for the reply!:twilightsmile: Yeah, I asked a couple of my friends to proof read, I guess this is what I get.:applejackunsure:

1625363 You're face is beautiful Armalite, may it never change.

1628108 My swiss army knees only serve to shine my eyes.

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