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Almost wanted to five star this for how big a troll it is.




I would kill you, but that ending was prwrty sweet

All I can think of is this - "I'M LAUGHING FOR REAL RIGHT NOW"

#5 · Jul 13th, 2011 · · ·

"scattered everywhere in a big fucking mess"


#6 · Jul 18th, 2011 · · ·


#7 · Jul 24th, 2011 · · ·

It would have been a better ending if Spike survived to live through the sorrow of lossing another loved one. Wow I'm pretty cruel:pinkiecrazy:

I was starting to laugh even before the last paragraph, but that last paragraph just made my day. Thank you sir.

I felt that twist in my bones... but still took me completely unprepared... I hope you get fever again soon, i want to read some more!(j/k, fever is not fun at all)

I saw the trollation coming from a mile away, and I did nothing to stop it.


I'm shedding a tear of laughter after seeing the ending , sir I must say you're such a BAMF!

FUCK YEAH I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was the very first Big MacinSpike shipping fic I've read. Beautifully done! It was...just the way you weaved those two characters together. You really did a fantastic job developing their love for each other. Your feign of Spike's possible love for Twilight was a shocking twist, and that moment of the apple falling on his head was simply inspired! I've never known a better "spark" between two lovers in a shipping story like this.

When I got to the ending, I actually cried. I didn't want to see their love ended so prematurely. The way you symbolize apathy with a "muffin", your reference to the "accident" with Twilight, and the way you represent the crushing reality of death via an "anvil" was simply astounding. This had to be one of the most impressive stories about love and devotion I have ever read.

I hope to read more from you. :moustache:

Your comment made me laugh as hard as the story did.

At first, I was :applejackunsure:

But then I was :twilightoops:

What the crap?
Well, you could have touched up on it a bit more. "Quiet", not "quite". The hex code reference could've been done away with. I could go on but you wrote this at 3a.m.. It's actually pretty coherent, so kudos for that.

The twist, however...genius. You could have done a lot more with it though, by making it the highlight of the fic and it alone. Well, sir, if this is what you can produce at 3a.m....carry on, brony, carry on.

Damn you sir, that was amazing

Interesting fic. The tragedy was handled well and MacxSpike shipping was unexpected, but the ending is what makes it deserve five stars. :rainbowlaugh:

I admit this:
I went a bit Trollestia during this.

FUNNY AS HELL. i coughed :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

LMAOOO ITS 3 AM HERE AND I HAVE A FEVER :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: ...are you watching me :derpyderp1:

That ending was pure AWESOME!

My faces throughout the fic:
"Everypony looked like their father had just touched them in the bathing-suit area.":pinkiesmile:
"Spike just stared emptily, but intensively, at the ground, like he had a grass fetish.":twilightsmile:
"The only times she talked to me was when she wanted my help with something, which she knew I’d always gladly accept.":fluttershysad:
"I sometimes dream of having a big stallion that can hold me real tight.":rainbowderp:
"He put on a big smile when he saw that the dragon was looking at him with wide eyes of anticipation, and reeled him in for a kiss.":rainbowkiss:
"Right before their lips met, a huge fucking anvil fell from the sky and crushed both of their skulls.":facehoof:
"And this, my friends, is why you shouldn’t be at the computer at 3am with a huge god damn fever.
Because, if you do - Shit Happens" :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::rainbowlaugh::trollestia:


It's 1 in the morning, I got a huge glass of soda, I have school tomorrow, and I'm blasting Zebrahead while reading this while laughing my lungs out.
You sir, have made this one of the best nights of my life!:rainbowlaugh:

I'm sure it can be agreed that this story is relatively horrible... Everything is wrong: grammar, OOC characters, the fact that Spike was hatched in Canterlot and wouldn't know anything about his homeland... :facehoof:

But that ending! That was the best ending to a (I suspect) purposely horribly written story. :rainbowlaugh:

214923 Think, you must, I bet this was posted before the Cutie Mark Crusaders episode. Doth thou acknowledge yee past accident?
P.S. This story was buckin' funny.


I never said it wasn't brilliant, just horribly written mechanics wise. I enjoyed reading it.

Yeah, I have no idea when I read this in relation to the CMC episode. Depending on which one you mean. There are several. :ajbemused:

341669 The one where they ask the mane 6 about their cutie marks.

Hahaha wow! :yay:

can't stop laughin :rainbowlaugh:

And this, my friends, is why you shouldn’t be at the computer at 3am with a huge god damn fever. Because, if you do - Shit Happens

A truer statement never written.


Wtf that was hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

*wall of text* :twilightoops:

Damn you know what I hate? fucking procrastinators!
You know what else I hate? sidewalks!
long story short: I hate you
:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: for the name

thats right! :twilightangry2:

That did not turn out how I thought it would.



ever Read.

EVER. :derpytongue2:

uhhhhh what did I just read:rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::derpyderp2::heart::twilightoops:

I have been feeling depressed all day.
Thanks for the laugh. XD

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