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"Description? Oh come on, I KNEW we were forgetting something!"
^Calm down, it's just a description Sweetie Belle. As I said, it's about the story.^
'Aren't we supposed to tell ponies what the story is about?'
^They can read the title, can't they?^
"I thought we were going to show this to everypony in Ponyville... Why are we putting it up here? I don't want to be associated with a story like this!"
^But you ARE one of the authors. Be proud of our work for a change!^
'Ya'know, I think ya'll should stop worrying so much. Just tell them to enjoy our story!'
^No need to tell them, they'll enjoy it! It's as awesome as Rainbow Dash is.^
'I guess ya got a point Scoot.'
"Sigh, I just hope everypony will like it."
^Would you just stop worrying about everything?^
"Would you just stop making every story revolve around Rainbow Dash?"
'WILL YA'LL JUST STOP ARGUIN'?'

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Comments ( 14 )

A story that talks about the Crusaders writing a story about Rainbow Dash beating zombies. :rainbowderp:

We need to go deeper...

I shall give it 4/5. Zombies are my favourite kind of monsters

Amazing thing is, I could see this happening in an episode.:raritywink: Good job Sir/Madam :moustache:

That was fun to read.

This was so cute. I too could totally see it being an episode! :scootangel:

“Yeah I got it. It’s called a caret and-"

'Scootaloo's a rabbit now?'

^I'M NOT A RABBIT! I'M NOT A DODO OR A CHICKEN EITHER! SO JUST-^

@WHO DARES MOCK THE ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE? THOU SHALT TASTE MINE DISPLEASURE!@

^Sorry, Princess Luna.^

'Ah think we need ta do more editing.'

ye gads BANG... il be back in two ticks i have to cleen up the mess my heart made when it exploed from the cmc Daww'nes :heart:

Nice work scoots, derpy approves :derpyderp1:

Thanks for the kind words so far. I just changed one small error I made. (Had Applebloom say 'I' despite her accent.)

Pretty cool concept, i really like this:heart:

Awesome, absolutely awesome. Just like Rainbow Dash.

This was so much fun to read. I'd like to see you try doing more stories involving the "behind-the-scenes" effort of the CMC writing fics. Although this might present a bit of a challenge, as there's a possibility the joke might quickly get old, but that's definitely not dependent on your writing abilities. Maybe next they could write stories about Applejack or Rarity? Just an idea.

Good stuff! :rainbowlaugh:

That was really good, job well done. :pinkiehappy:

Before I read it all the dialong looks strange to me...it's good so far though.

Now that I've read it I understand the dialogue. Could you put everything the write in a quote box so we can get to it easier? That might work.


I love this story.

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