Rainbowdash has blocked out her past for quite some time know and she has lived a pretty good life. But when unwanted questions come up, she'll have to face the music for her lies, and she'll have to realize the truth. But there isn't much she can do about it. After all, that's the way the cookie crumbles.
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I liked it, my only real issue is in that huge long paragraph, you had a character -that you only referred to as she- talking at the start of the paragraph and Rainbow talking near the end, now paragraph for a new speaker please. Other than that, awesome, I shall be awaiting more!
7/10 Big Macs.
1560584
Thanks. This is my first one, and i just know ill be going back to edit my chapters.
Mreow.
I'm a cat.
1561770
That's all you have to say? Did you like it???
What the hell?
1562160
Yes I liked it.
Now get on Skype.
GRAMMAR. PLEASE. USE YOUR GRAMMAR.
Mreow.
I'm a cat.
1562809
Da hell? I published my second chapter?
Oh crud.
1562869
Merp
1562876
At least I was finished before I published.
1562879
yup.
HAND!!!
1568252
Oh crud.
WELL ITS NOT EVERYDAY YOU TURN INTO A PONY!!!
:1570004 so there sisters?
interesting
1573062
Grammar, you should get some.
1574623 thats why i have english 12
1574716
I do not know what you just said...
its a class for students who have yet to pass their writing proficiency i teaches us valuable writing techniques and reading
here have another thwew free moustaches
1/10
i dont usaly give out derpys
OOhh my g-- I sincerely apologise for my bro, (ShadowF) he's... Pretty dumb...
1584495
Umm, could you translate for me?
I don't speak mustache or Derpy.
I speak Pinkamena Diane Pie
1590816
Sure, id have helped you earlier but... Stupid sleep patterns.
He's trying to say that his rating is 1/10 derpys, then he says that he doesn't useually give them out, so he probably thinks that it's good? I'm not sure, he's... Complicated… anyway, with regards to te moustaches it just means that your story is very good, a lot of people give hem out when they like a story.
Also, new chapter?
1592012
I'm working on it.
Oh, thanks.
1594111
New chapter out. Be happy.
1594519
SPELLING. PLEASE. USE YOUR SPELLING.
I'm with her on this one ^^^
"grabbing Ed tail" wut?
"a rite" yeah,
If you want I'm happy to pre-read a story before you officially upload it.
1594652>>1594596
Ugh!
It's hard when you are on your iPad!
Fine, ShadowT, I'll take you up on your offer. I'll pm you my password to unpublished chapters soon enough
1594676
Get on Skype.
1594676
I know I'm writing this from my iPod, I've been working on a different story, autocorrect helps.
1594676 love this chapter but how did octavia get in this?
Why was there a but in her sandwich?? Was it a chicken but?
1594676 I write on my IPad and it doesn't come out like this. I barely have any spelling mistakes
Don't you have your spellcheck on?
1597276
I am honestly not quite sure why there are so many mistakes. It might be because of my spellcheck.
1596622
They just mentioned her, she wasn't actually in it.
1597946 is it ON!?
1597946 also didn't answer my question
Was their a chicken but in RD's sandwich ??
1598033
Nope it was supposed to be bite.
And it is on.
1598241 then why the bad spellings?
Is it faulty? Retarded? Brain dead?
1598241
Probably all of that
1597946 Where?
I.DONT.GET.IT
There all EXTREEMILY OOC!! Come on NONE of them would EVER say any of that well except maybe RD but Twilight calling RD a freak
Fluttershy swearing 
WTF!!!
the cookie must not crumble
Okay, I recommend you make Dash have a better life. I'm tempted to unlike, but not dislike, because you are twisting Dashie's life around in the worst possible way. The [Sad] tag fits well, but grannysmith, you're a humorous girl... So embrace your comedy talent and use it in stories. Better profit. So, yet again, I recommend you make Dash have a better life.
I KNOW WHERE YOU GO TO SCHOOL.
Because... You know... We go to the same school.
1620758
I will fix it!!
Lord, patience.
1623831
Get on Skype.
Oh wait... Your sleeping at [her]'s house
Ok, so th beginning is kind of confusing. As my first fimfiction, this one wasn't very good and short. I'll get better.
1623982
It's not bad, at one part in like chapter 3 or 4 you lost me, remember, hardly anybody's first FICA are very good. Look at mine, or Skitts, or -once its out- ShadowF's (trust me, I've read it. It's more confusing that most of the comments he gives out.
Like 1624814 said your first fic is always difficult I mean look at Mine
I'm gonna try get back to
Also it's cancelled coz I'm a
1623982 what about fluttershy?
What ever happened to Fluttershy?!