My day started so simple. I was gonna play guitar in the park, but was chased away by one of the town's local gangs. As I ran, I tripped and somehow ended up in a different world. A world run by ponies! Title inspired by the Alice Cooper song "Lost in America". Note: I plan to finish my other fic soon, I just wanted to start this one.
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Yo faggot whats in the guitar case?.... Man what if this happened to me? O wait, I live in Texas and have a concealed handguns license. Gotta love texas the only state you can legally kill someone for trespassing on your property.
After reading "The God Particle", I couldn't enjoy this story as I thought I would. Probably because the other one has a deeper plot and long, descriptive scenarios. BUT, I'm give it a try since I'm a big fan of humans-in-equestria fics.
How the buck did I get a perfect 5 from 2 different readers?
127346make that two people and one emotionally fucked up 13 year old kid from Florida (hmmmmm...tmi maybe...nah just enough)
127483Make it Five!
Okay, really, formatting is an issue here. It's just big clumps of text.
An important rule of thumb: New character speaking, new line.
Also, a bit more description wouldn't hurt.
Just because rainbow dash has rainbow colored hair does not make her gay or bisexual.. just sayin
131915
True, though her personality doesn't help. Nor does the fact that she resembles a flying gay pride banner...
131652now 8 and one emotionally fucked up teen (I mean me) except one of them gave it a low rating
131952true
131915 from the moment I saw her I thought she was a lesbian, and my opinion hasn't changed in the 6 months that I have been a Brony.
This is definitely an interesting story far. I've been hesitant to read a fiction in which someone comes to Ponyville, considering they have rarely gotten good reviews, but it's not too bad ^.^
Excellent
This is a great fic and I want more of it.
"BACON!" Fail! Ponies are vegan!
149640 I wouldn't say that. They eat eggs, right? That's technically meat.
ha! good brony joke about dr. whooves and the tardis
149704 Well, you don't have to kill something to eat eggs.
While reading through this before I write the next update, I realized autocorrect changed some things. Ugh, why does it change real words sometimes?
Oh god I beg you to give him 4 feat of snow efectivly locking him away in his well provisioned house so he may write more
so far this is a great story
. just dont end it porlly
Nice Says
I 
it so far
157722 I wish that happened, but no, nature enjoys mocking me.
Cannot wait to read more!
159061just like luna and firewall in TTEOAP "nature be trollin"
Going by the the multiverse theory he likely just ending up and a universe where she and AJ are lesbians I see nothing wrong with that.
149640 Vegetarian Bacon
From what it looks like no one noticed you updated.
I didn't think you were dead, not for one second.
You probably have school to think of just like the rest of us in America.
Oh and I don't believe I had a account photo last time I commented here. (If I ever did.)
Anyways glad to see you updating.
EDIT: I wasn't even registered when I first read this, I see no comments sent by me.
I saw this story with a name similar to mine and had to check it out.
I just received an update saying that someone was tracking this. What the fuck? People actually like this garbage?