Hi there, I'm new on FIMFiction and for my first fic I'd like somepony to proof read it first. If anypony is interested click this link right here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Aknc_N2y2JOilaYCNfy4I-IpJAkH5Bl2-GCKWU0kcec/edit?hl=en_US

The fic is full of random comedy, so if you don't like random then don't click it. Thanks!