2nd person human anon X Cheerilee
Your life is terrible. No way of sugar coating it. You never knew your dad, your mom hates you, and you are constantly bullied at school. After a particularly bad day, you find yourself in Equestria. Things are begining to look up.
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Very nice, one of the best I've read in a while. Thumbs up, fave, a watch, and a
for you.
Nice HiE bro, sounding really good :) you should also check out my HiE pl0x
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Thank you all for reading!
634516 I was thing maybe 4-5 chapters.
Interesting...
I like this!
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It's different. I like different.
Interesting.....
I'll be watching this. Keep up the good work my friend.
Kinda short but still good.
Considering the main character doesn't seem to be a brony, he is rather accepting of Twilights magic wouldn't you say?
662902 In this universe MLP isn't a tv show, and considering that he's already met a talking pony, why wouldn't magic surprise him. Besides, she's a unicorn. If you saw a unicorn, you probably wouldn't be surprised if it did magic.
663463 fair enough, but I would still be a little shocked. Not even a look of disbelief from him strikes me as odd, but this is your story so feel free to ignore my ramblings
Very interesting, so fav, thumb, and looking forward to the next chapter.
it's on now boi
smooth............like sand paper now i wanna see how this turns out!!!!
Hmmmm.... interesting.... will keep track of this....
wayyy too short
Really like this story!
*thinking of what to say next* uhh...
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799905 That made my night, thanks!
"your mind is full of fuck" ... best quote ever.
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damn i thought this would be a longer story....still great!
sequel?
974162 I'm not so sure about a sequel. I have some other fics I need to work on, and I have some other ideas I've been throwing around. It's a definite maybe, but don't get your hopes up.
I think this story could have been a bit longer... in terms of the romance
aaaaaw no sex?
1148167 No, I'm a minor, and I don't want my parents finding this and seeing that I wrote a story about sex with a pony. They already think it's weird that I watch the show in the first place.
1149163 *sigh* ok but how are they going to find it? i mean it's not like they have an account and watch you and read your story right?
1150276 Can't be too careful.
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Short and sweet.
At least you managed to finish it. It's always nice to finish a story, although there are times when I've wished I could keep a story going. In the meantime I'm just wishing that I could finish my own HumanxCheerilee fic.
Anyway, I'm going off topic there. This was a very enjoyable story and it was fun to read. Favourited and upvoted, plus I'm following you now.
A crumpled one. Also, kind of an... Used pattern. Not much romantic, may I say.
Still, not as bad as could be. 6/10.
Great story
keep it up like to see more of this
have a great derpy day
It feels a little rushed, but what is there is pretty good.
Holy shit, this story was awesome. I almost cried at the beginning because I always feel this way when I'm in school. Keep up the good work.
That was beautiful! Keep up the good work!
That right there sold me on this fic. It isn't some kind of strange freak occurrence with that the ponies just shrug off.
6858174 Yeah, my old stuff really isn't great.
What a pansy.
cool story man
754037
That's what 'she' said.
Short and sweet.
Most excellent.
I was on the fence until this point, really.
This, right here, is what sold me. Such an under appreciated Arnold Schwarzenegger joke there. I love you lol.