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It's almost time for the Grand Galloping Gala, and the Mane Six know what to expect this time. Problem is that neither Applejack nor Rainbow Dash really fit in to an event like the Gala. So, naturally, they decide to have a competition - who can fit in best at the Gala? Will either of them be able to mingle with the Canterlot elite? They have every reason to be on their best behaviour - after all, the forfeit for the loser is almost too terrible to put into words...

Now with a cover picture, hopefully soon with a good cover picture!

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Comments ( 14 )

Oh, I am so tracking this. Looks great! I can't wait for more! :ajsmug:

Ah'm sure AJ will make auntie and uncle Orange proud. :twilightsmile:

Equestria is fucked.

That is all.

Apple-"How come y'all aren't doing any gardening?"-jack vs Rainbow "Danger" Dash :rainbowdetermined2::ajsmug:

ooh! i like the concept, cant wait too see moar!

Second chapter is up!

Applejack oughta know by now that Dash considers anything she's not specifically forbidden to do, in writing, with her signature and a photograph of her reading the rules, to be fair game. Can't blame her for wishful thinking, though. :ajbemused:

I was so excited when this updated, great chapter!

Hmm.... what exactly is Rainbow up to? :trixieshiftleft:

You must update! You must, you must, YOU MUST!
(Code for, I really really like this story! :raritystarry:)

And don't we all know that this will come to bite RD in the flank. :pinkiehappy:

I find it weird how Pinkie said the Cakes would never let RD or AJ babysit, when during the episode Baby Cakes they asked both of them before asking Pinkie.

Also, what in the world is a hen party?

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The idea is that the Cakes wouldn't subject RD or AJ to the twins while they're teething; they're way too aggressive and tough to handle. I could have made it more obvious, so I'll tweak that.

And I didn't realise the term "hen party" isn't used in the US. It's the female equivalent of a stag party; a bachelorette party.

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