Spitfire loves Soarin' and he loves her. But when Spitfire has a foal, they need to find out how to be a Wonderbolt and raise a filly. Will Spitfire have to quit just because of a baby? Or will she find a way to cope?
Then, after a marriage and the beginning of motherhood for another mare, both foals end up somewhere unexpected. They are still with their parents, though barely receive any attention. So a babysitter comes along, but with a secret plan. The 4 wonderbolts set out to find their kids. Will they be rescued before their death?
Happy endings can come! :-)
Chapters (3)
Hello!
Fave before read.
EDIT: Just read it. A bit rushed, but good nonetheless.
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just wanna let you know, everytime someone else talks, a new paragraph starts.
try to give it a little better flow, i can see a lot of potential!
if you want me to proof read, message my profile.
I find your lack of tags disturbing
1464660 lack of what again
1464417 Agreed, also it could do with some editing.
1465047 Lack of tags like "Comedy", "Romance", "Slice of Life", you know those things that help people determine what your fanfic is about.
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1466780 hehe
1464660 i added one
1464548 what for?
Liked it,just a bit to rushed like the others say.Be more descripted and all.
Wait a sec...Wild Fire is the name of Sabrina Alberghetti's ponysona, so does that mean... OH MY...
sabrina wha-?!
WILD FIRESHOULD BE CONNECTED SO WILDFIRE!Please update soon!
want more eh?
More!
Yes
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Why is this chapter called "Rainbow Secret's" if she doesn't even appear or get mentioned?
changed it
nicely done. and centered around Spitfire. Spitfire=instant fave. cant wait to read it later when i have time!
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that was funny 
just please do not yell in my face. oh wait you can't. you don't know where i live. :P
moustache is awesome
I think perhaps foucs on the akwardness of Soarin and Spitfire's forced marriage and of how Spitfire might be reacting because of the foal inside her (You know weird cravings, sudden mood swings, morning sickness).
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In my story, it took Rainbow Dash an entire sequel to get through her pregnancy. In this one, it's introduced, and completed in less than a quarter of a single chapter equivalent to mine! It's very rushed.
It is good, though. I like the idea. It's just what this website needs, which is a little originality.