~This is my first... Ever! story. So please be nice and if i have made a mistake or contradiction somewhere please leave a comment so i can fix it? thanks :)~
As Octavia returns home from her Grand Galloping Gala audition. She finds herself wanting a drink but all of the bars that she knows of are closed. So Octavia takes it upon herself to venture towards a club of which she has never been to before. It is here where she meets one Vinyl Scratch. As the two spend more time for each other they realise that they are made for each other.
Chapters (1)
Hmmmm...
Pretty good, though it could use a once over by a proofreader.
Other than that, it was decent enough.
I'm going with trollfic.
I'm not reading this, I just wanted an excuse to use this new emote.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
its good but you need to skip a line when someone new is talking
The concept is fine, your idea for this story is not a bad one. However, you need to submit this for proofreading. Ponychan and EqD would be the places I suggest looking first. Keep practicing your writing and sentence structure, read a lot as well.