"My faithful student I believe you once asked about the nature of the Alicorns and how me and my sister came to power. At the time I did not answer you but today I would like to come clean. This is the story of the Holy Grail War, and me formerly Celestia Eclipse, and my partner. The man who called himself Saber."
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1452504 I think your mistaken on some of those because i'm looking at the story right now and don't see any lack of capitals, their are plenty of indications to the current speaker, and their are NO OC Alicorns in this story at all.
1452687 Ah I see.
Sorry the way you wrote that comment I thought it was like that throughout the whole story as opposed to in a few places. I didn't have anyone edit this is the problem, but I stand by what I said before, No OC Alicorns.
Not too bad. Might wanna get an editor for the grammar issues, but you already know that. Nice work :D
1502057 Yep in fact i have him working on it right now.
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Hm. This could possibly be interesting. Holy Grail Wars are never fun experiences, kids.