Glad the story ended with Spike getting all of the Mane 6. Now we need a sequel with Celestia and Luna atleast joining in and possibly joining the harem.
Looks like its gonna be a epilogue.....I don't know how someone could make a sequel for this. Spike's gotten all the mares, it's seriously only the Princesses left, and Cadence......
....yep. definitely an epilogue.....unless Celestia wants all of them to learn something else about Spike--draconic insemination results in instant pregnancy. (Wait, if that was the case [my speculation, not connected to the story], how come Pinkie doesn't have a bouncing baby foal to play with the Cake twins? Kinda like a reverse babysitting thing where Mr. and Mrs. Cake take care of Pinkie's baby while Pinkie, Spike, and the rest of the Mane 6 go on vacation for a couple of weeks....hmm )
So. This story will be marked as 'Incomplete' until all editing has been done. I must see this story was a wild ride. I am so glad to see Spike with his harem. I love Spike x harem fics. In any case, I hope to see more good stories from you. I would also like to see more Princest from you, but that's your call. I also wonder how that massive wedding will be received?
well, heh, i gotta say throughout t fic i kept gettin reminded of path of cloud's work but, other then that i enjoyed it greatly . also if there's moar then please get busy gettin it done so, that we can find out what happens next
Now this is my kind of conclusion I'm glad to see that even though this is a crossover you made it your own. You did some excellent work; you should be proud. Now, just to see that Princess scene.
Thanks, Path, I've really wanted to get your thoughts on this since you've started a group on Spike's harem, I wanted to see what you've thought and I always look forward to your comments so thanks a lot. I am proud of it, even though it's not the edited version. And don't worry, I'm working on the epilogue as we speak.
This was an amazing story! Yea the erotic parts were well done but it was the little things that kept me reading. The humor, the plot twists, and the characters were all done really well.
“Damn it all, now it’s back,” Spike snapped as he turned around revealing his hidden secret. The girls eyes widened in shock as they saw a newly released phallus, standing erect under his other member.
Sequal please
sequel with the princesses joining?
i would love to see that!
...That's the ending? You leave us part way through some great Princest as a cliffy?
You cruel, evil person, you...
Yes Fuck!Fuck Yes!
yay
Glad the story ended with Spike getting all of the Mane 6. Now we need a sequel with Celestia and Luna atleast joining in and possibly joining the harem.
I just wanna say, I saw that title and immediately thought of SexuaLobster's Pleasure Island series. And hoped that it would be a crossover with that.
If it's the final chapter then why does it still say 'incomplete'?
3774999 I think the end of the chapter hints at why
E-pi-logue! E-pi-logue! E-pi-logue!
oh my fucking yes!
please for the love all that is pony! please tell us there will be a sequel! there needs to be a sequel!
I just read the title and all I can think of is...
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I was thinking the same thing. I was waiting for the laser-beam walrus to destroy the island and that weird lady with the penis-shaped chaingun...
Bring in the Princesses please!
Just....................................................
JUST.............................................................
FUUUUUUCCCKKKKINNNNNGGGGGGG
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS,
10/10,5/5, UTTER, UTTER PERFECTION!!!!!!!!!!!
SIMPLY YESSS!!!!!!!!!
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Looks like its gonna be a epilogue.....I don't know how someone could make a sequel for this. Spike's gotten all the mares, it's seriously only the Princesses left, and Cadence......
....yep. definitely an epilogue.....unless Celestia wants all of them to learn something else about Spike--draconic insemination results in instant pregnancy. (Wait, if that was the case [my speculation, not connected to the story], how come Pinkie doesn't have a bouncing baby foal to play with the Cake twins? Kinda like a reverse babysitting thing where Mr. and Mrs. Cake take care of Pinkie's baby while Pinkie, Spike, and the rest of the Mane 6 go on vacation for a couple of weeks....hmm )
......like they say, Pregnancy is Magic(TM)
This story was amazing!! Any other person would have passed out or does from such a sex session!!
Making work!! 11 out of 10!
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Very great story. I it. I would like to see an epilogue or a sequel to this story you made.
That was a huge sex orgy. And it was awsome.
I think Celestia's talk with Spike may have to do with her not being include in Spike harem or that he is part of hers.
So. This story will be marked as 'Incomplete' until all editing has been done. I must see this story was a wild ride. I am so glad to see Spike with his harem. I love Spike x harem fics. In any case, I hope to see more good stories from you. I would also like to see more Princest from you, but that's your call. I also wonder how that massive wedding will be received?
OMFG this story man, it was awesome loved every minute of it. Tho I will never be able to look at oatmeal cream pies the same. Damn you Pinkie, WHY?
Great story man... Great story ;)
well, heh, i gotta say throughout t fic i kept gettin reminded of path of cloud's work but, other then that i enjoyed it greatly . also if there's moar then please get busy gettin it done so, that we can find out what happens next
Damn.
Now this is my kind of conclusion I'm glad to see that even though this is a crossover you made it your own. You did some excellent work; you should be proud. Now, just to see that Princess scene.
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Thanks, Path, I've really wanted to get your thoughts on this since you've started a group on Spike's harem, I wanted to see what you've thought and I always look forward to your comments so thanks a lot. I am proud of it, even though it's not the edited version. And don't worry, I'm working on the epilogue as we speak.
3917849 It's nice to see a fic and a writer who improve and really advance through the course of the story.
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Again, thanks, , my editor said the same thing and I noticed a significant difference as I've been writing.
you gotta do an "Epilogue" where spike and the mane 6 start a family or Luna & Celestia join the harem or a Sequal with zecora joining the harem
Spike is the Harem king.
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greaT FIC MAN, this is marvelous
It seems that even here Luna is Adorkable. Spike,you da baws!
This was an amazing story! Yea the erotic parts were well done but it was the little things that kept me reading. The humor, the plot twists, and the characters were all done really well.
six hot mares at the same + one dragon = SPIKE IS AWESOME
though of course he gets all the mares
.......whew. I literally, no really I literally came four times reading that. The mane 6 aren't the only one's with drenched marehoods right now...!
Seriously, there has to be a level of how cute somepony can be before it becomes a lethal weapon
I believe a certain penguin said 132% adorability.
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Thanks for informing me of the wonders of SexuaLobster. Hadn't heard about him before your comment.
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Are you talking about penguins of madagascar?
You've done good, Spike. Ya done good.
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Took the words right out of my mouth
THEEEERE’S TWO OF THEM?!!