About time this was updated. And I'm certainly glad to see Spike turned the tables on Rarity so quickly. As for what's happening to Spike with those mares, they all want him, because he gets ALL the mares.
Definitely wasn't expecting the chapter to go quite like it did. I'm guessing Fluttershy is most likely to be next on his list. How much longer is it gonna be til everybody finds out he's bedded all 6 of them?
Well, it reads like a poorly translated hentai manga, but I must admit that I always enjoyed the cheesy charm of those particular manga. The narm is always entertaining.
That right, put that mare in her place! "I'm a Dragon", tell her Spike. No pony tells you what to do, (well maybe just Twilight) but nopony else tells him what to do.
Awesome, awesome chapter. I had to wait to read this chapter, and I was a little worried when Spike appeared to be the one being dominated, cause while I can respect and admire good writing of a male sub to a female dom, I'm purely top so it doesn't really do it for me. The role switch was a fuck yeah moment. Plus, we all really wanted to see Spike go all dragon badass anyways. I love everything about this chapter so much! And some of the humor was just hilarious, especially the quips at the bodyguards. This is one of those times I really love FP as a character, which is pretty common because I think he's a cool guy and him and Fleur are cute together. Only bothers me when he's randomly a douche, people hook him up with Rarity, or people write him so that he's basically only nice to Rarity to get in bed with her.
On thing, this sounds ridiculous,
Fluttershy was in a daze of amazement at Spike’s amazing feat. To not only catch her and stop her from falling, but to catch the food as well was nothing short of amazing, but Fluttershy already knew that.
Amazing was used way too many times, try fantastic, impressive, or incredible instead.
My first honest thought when Spike was the slave in the bdsm: he's going to stay soft and he's going to leave her if not kill her. that was honestly my first thought! And when she ordered the boot lick, I thought he'd respond "if it comes even close to my mouth, you're loosing at least one toe"... but after that it reminds me of another fic about Spike where Rarity is in a maid outfit and follows every order he commands
and I have the sneaking suspicion that the next chapter is going to be a mix of 1) explaining to Rarity that his species is a polygynous species (like ~90% of mammal species) and she is special to him and nobody will ever change that, but when that doesn't work he'll use the master card and overpower her into eager, obedient submission and 2) Finding either the evidence of what Fluttershy was doing, or catching her, and slowly/carefully easing the situation like necessary for the delicate flower that she is
but Maybe the second part might be stretched out through the next few chapters and this next one might be the first, but explaining to Twi as well (or maybe learn it from her and probably wait until after getting Fluttershy to tell the group that everyone's been with him and polygynous species, bla bla bla...)
at least that's my guess... and I can't wait to read whatever it ends up being
reading all of this i love the work you've done with pretty much everypony except rarity. she disgusts me as a character, but is still very well written. whatever happens, i hope he ends up with somepony else or the harem route. good work liked and faved
That awkward moment where people are theorizing on how the outcome of the story will be... and you're already well familiar with the source material and know damn well how it ends...
even though it didn't turn out like one would expect we now just met the queen of clop herself: Mistress Rarity by the way this chapter inspired me to make a group dedicated to her
In a quick instance, Spike flexed his muscles and in one quick movement, he pulled his hands and wings apart, snapping the ropes and maneuvered his tail to pull the blindfold off of him. He then quickly threw his shirt off, but left his shorts on. Spike’s sudden reaction caused Rarity to shriek and fall back on her butt. When she looked up she saw Spike standing with his muscular frame hunched over, his wings unfurled, eye glowing emerald green and smoke pouring from his nostrils. “S-Spike? D-Darling?” She stammered in fear with a waning smile on her face.
Spike to Rarity: You think Dominance is your ally? You merely adopted the Dom. I was born in it; molded by it. I didn’t become submissive until I was already a man by then it was nothing to me but HUMILIATING.
Hey, everypony, here's the 9th installment of Spike's little adventure.
2488194 His swaggery and badassey is unreal!
I liked how Spike turned the tables on Rarity.
YAY, finally~
Oh, note, I was so glad that Spike did what he did. If it were me, I would have flipped shit on Rarity.
About time this was updated. And I'm certainly glad to see Spike turned the tables on Rarity so quickly. As for what's happening to Spike with those mares, they all want him, because he gets ALL the mares.
Liked and favourited without reading because I like you.
Fuck Yeah!! Spike you dat man
.................awwwwww yeah, Fluttershy is next! I WANT IT ALREADY!
Why do I have the sneaking suspicion that he's going to go all psycho and have some massive orgy where he rapes all of them or something?
And then Luna and Celestia have to come and stop him, only to be taken in as well?
Definitely wasn't expecting the chapter to go quite like it did. I'm guessing Fluttershy is most likely to be next on his list. How much longer is it gonna be til everybody finds out he's bedded all 6 of them?
2488578 That is actually a good point. And I have to agree with you too.
I don't now wther to or cheer for a sadest becoming a masochest
Well, it reads like a poorly translated hentai manga, but I must admit that I always enjoyed the cheesy charm of those particular manga. The narm is always entertaining.
That right, put that mare in her place!
"I'm a Dragon", tell her Spike. No pony tells you what to do, (well maybe just Twilight) but nopony else tells him what to do.
Great update! Keep them coming, pun intended!
2488957 Some people are both. I have a female friend like that, she very much so enjoys both sides.
Awesome, awesome chapter. I had to wait to read this chapter, and I was a little worried when Spike appeared to be the one being dominated, cause while I can respect and admire good writing of a male sub to a female dom, I'm purely top so it doesn't really do it for me. The role switch was a fuck yeah moment. Plus, we all really wanted to see Spike go all dragon badass anyways. I love everything about this chapter so much! And some of the humor was just hilarious, especially the quips at the bodyguards. This is one of those times I really love FP as a character, which is pretty common because I think he's a cool guy and him and Fleur are cute together. Only bothers me when he's randomly a douche, people hook him up with Rarity, or people write him so that he's basically only nice to Rarity to get in bed with her.
On thing, this sounds ridiculous,
Amazing was used way too many times, try fantastic, impressive, or incredible instead.
2489222 don't care from my perspective sadest are slightly insane and contorling but that my oppin not very fond bondge anything just seems wrong
Get cadence, Luna and Celestia in the story!
My first honest thought when Spike was the slave in the bdsm: he's going to stay soft and he's going to leave her if not kill her. that was honestly my first thought! And when she ordered the boot lick, I thought he'd respond "if it comes even close to my mouth, you're loosing at least one toe"... but after that it reminds me of another fic about Spike where Rarity is in a maid outfit and follows every order he commands
and I have the sneaking suspicion that the next chapter is going to be a mix of
1) explaining to Rarity that his species is a polygynous species (like ~90% of mammal species) and she is special to him and nobody will ever change that, but when that doesn't work he'll use the master card and overpower her into eager, obedient submission
and 2) Finding either the evidence of what Fluttershy was doing, or catching her, and slowly/carefully easing the situation like necessary for the delicate flower that she is
but Maybe the second part might be stretched out through the next few chapters and this next one might be the first, but explaining to Twi as well (or maybe learn it from her and probably wait until after getting Fluttershy to tell the group that everyone's been with him and polygynous species, bla bla bla...)
at least that's my guess... and I can't wait to read whatever it ends up being
Loves it =D Great new chapter!!
hail to the king!
2489331 Then it seems you watch way too much TV
Spike is the DragonMaster.
2490363 No it just seems to pass the bottem line in my oppinun
This goes to prove that you do NOT want to piss off a Dragon.
reading all of this i love the work you've done with pretty much everypony except rarity. she disgusts me as a character, but is still very well written. whatever happens, i hope he ends up with somepony else or the harem route. good work liked and faved
That awkward moment where people are theorizing on how the outcome of the story will be... and you're already well familiar with the source material and know damn well how it ends...
Not spoiling anything for anyone, so don't ask.
I really like the cross-over. Keep it up.
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Didn't mean it that way. But still... Paws are awesome.
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yup i was just messin wit ya
YEAH DUDE YOU ARE FUCKING AWESOME
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Please, keep this is up. This is amazing!
BUCK YEAH SPIKE!!! Show that prissy Mare who the master is heheheheh
Spike got laid with five mares and two of them admitted to loving him. Way to go, Spike!
3806486 Three, darling; Pinkie, Twilight and now Rarity
even though it didn't turn out like one would expect we now just met the queen of clop herself: Mistress Rarity
by the way this chapter inspired me to make a group dedicated to her
Man this was some nice Sparity action there, nice job!
Now you fucked up! NOW YOU FUCKED UP!!
Spike to Rarity: You think Dominance is your ally? You merely adopted the Dom. I was born in it; molded by it. I didn’t become submissive until I was already a man by then it was nothing to me but HUMILIATING.