You really need to diversify your sex terms. You had, inner fire moving south way to many times, and snatch isn't really hot or sensual. Usually its best to just allude, and if not, come up with something sensual. Also this makes no sense,
Rarity pulled her hands up to the side of her hands and pushed with all her might,
Overall, not bad, and great use of Spike's tail. I especially enjoy the Spike and Rarity moments; they're very sweet.
Spike looked back up at the moon, trying to relax again. Well, at least this little matter is dealt with. Now I can finally enjoy my vacation without any troubles at all, he thought to himself.
Here you go everyone. Sorry for taking so long, the holidays were kinda hectic for me and my editor, buy here it is, the new chapter. Enjoy
Spike. This drake deserves a metal for making an excuse on the spot against twilight
Good chapter and hope this doesn't end how the anime its based off of does cause i wanna see Spike end up with atleast Rarity but preferrably both.
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And an Olympic Gold for Endurance
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That to. And for generally being a dragon.
Perfect. :o
Something about this highly appeals to me. Just keep it up.
I seriously hope Spike ends up with both Rarity and Pinkie.
I wonder if fluttershy is going to be added
I thought a dragon has two phallus.
Spike should grow a second member for his ladies use that dragon magic for something useful for once
how much longer until Twilight joins in on the fun?
also will the Princesses pop over for a bit? perhaps join in on the fun?
And then came the cowgirl and athlete of the century!
2 down, 4 to go
You really need to diversify your sex terms. You had, inner fire moving south way to many times, and snatch isn't really hot or sensual. Usually its best to just allude, and if not, come up with something sensual. Also this makes no sense,
Overall, not bad, and great use of Spike's tail. I especially enjoy the Spike and Rarity moments; they're very sweet.
Yeah, I know that's one of my weak spots, so I'm trying to work on it. Thanx for the criticism
Twilight's such a hardass. I hope she gets a spanking
2 down 4 to go.
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2009774 ahh!!!!!!!!! Its a fucking dalek! Hurry someone get the Doctor! But yeah only four left.
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You just keep telling yourself that, Spike...